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Dimmie Song [inspired by Margherita]
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Dimmie Song [inspired by Margherita] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Dimmie Song [inspired by Margherita]  Low and blown beneath the wind Lay dimmie flowers on the graves, Little petals of virgin white, Three-quarter inch in size. Naked eye sees spread of white Bend now low, see a lovely sight Carpeting ever the dusty ages Three-quarter inch in size… But if we grow to snail in height The purple assuages us in snow, And smaller yet some blue peeks out Less than miniscule in size… Dimmie flowers of nature’s best Grown wild throughout these lands, Kansa carpet evergreen Hold more than we realize.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Dimmie flowers of nature’s best Grown wild throughout these lands, Kansa carpet evergreen Hold more than we realize ============================= oh youre timing is superb...I just yesterday saw a hillside covered in these blossomed beauties...like little stars... lovely lovely poetess Sun.  |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
pretty piece |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
That is so nice and those are such pretty flowers too. Nice you did this for our wonderful Italian friend (who incidentally is not getting any more mosquitoe bites maybe  ) |
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j-oh-E Member
since 2003-05-01
Posts 59Texas, USA |
While flowers aren't the subjects of my writing, I do appreciate the way you allow a reader to kind of drift away as they read your work. This is prevalent in all of your poems I've read so far. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Sunshine, loved how you took us down to microscopic views of these lovely flowers (and the world)! Cor |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nice spring time write, love the flowers It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, what a truly lovely surprise here! So small these dimmies yet ever so perfectly designed in Paradise .. Naked eye sees spread of white Bend now low, see a lovely sight Carpeting ever the dusty ages Three-quarter inch in size… I very much enjoy all your poems dedicated to nature (the lonely Pine tree is forever carved in my memory!). It really feels great that my poem inspired you to write this. Thank you from the heart, dear Karilea! And dear Sharon, instead of "Happy" by Clinique I have now a touch of SSS and .... Vicks!!! haha .... fighting my battle with the Tiger mosquitos.(I'll report to you after a few days' experimentation).  Mille grazie! Hugs, Margherita |
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