Open Poetry #26 |
Walk With Me |
QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Do you ever awaken to a morning sun rise lighting up the dawn, and hear the birds chirping to awaken each new day. At twilight have you ever saw the glow of sunset with it's kaleidoscope of colors, and watched the birds winging on to roost, and felt the evening breeze against your face,have you ever touched the rushing waters of a cool mountain stream. Have you ever experienced a moon beam brightly flickering through the trees at night, or seen a shooting star streaking across the dark night sky, with twinkling stars winking as it passes by. Take my hand~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~end your solitude, and let us walk this journey together, and see these reflections of life, looking deep into each others eyes, let us cherish these experiences with love and bond forever come walk with me It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
glenn: goodness this is amazing! Take my hand~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~end your solitude, and let us walk this journey together amazing insight, my friend this IS enlightening xxoo |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This was absolutely beautiful - saved it to read again in my spare time. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
QjQ...A very beautiful poem with startling imagery tht just seems to draw me into the poem. I love the ending especially: Take my hand~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~end your solitude, and let us walk this journey together, and see these reflections of life, looking deep into each others eyes, let us cherish these experiences with love and bond forever come walk with me This is extremely romantic and gentle. It reminds me of the old-fashioned ways of knightly courting. ***Ivy Rose |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
QjQ, It does have a special feel to it. How wonderful to share all of life's most beautiful moments with another... Romantic and soft, Enjoyed, Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
thanks for all you replys!!! It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
A very beautiful walk.... It's very romantic and dreamy!!!! Enjoyed!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Who could resist? Surely no one... Like the pen name, very unique... QjQ.. like it!! |
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