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Just Came True
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Just Came True |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050
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Just Came True Have you seen her here before last seen holding my heart? I gave it to her in this dream now with it she won’t part Her skin is silky to the feel soft tones that cast a hue Of vibrant tints that blend into a satin silky smooth Two cat like lashes fluttering like velvet butterflies Trying to, conceal her two divine Garbo-esque eyes Two eyes that see things about me that I find hard to see The person that I always hoped that one day I might be She has a lure of gracefulness adorned by wit and charm That’s nestled with a devilish streak that one could not disarm Her heart is made of solid gold devotion matched by none A spirit never ceasing to always make time for fun A mind that’s always open to another’s point of view Compassion for her friend or foe sometimes hard to construe She’s warm and comfy hard as nails, a silly forceful calm A complicated tenderness as soothing as a balm We love to do so many things We can’t stand being apart If something we’re to happen to It would tear me apart She makes me feel so loved that sometimes I can feel quite ill The chance of ever losing her would make my world stand still She’s is the reason why I thrive the air that my heart breathes She keeps my spirit strong reviving hope in my belief That one day I will meet the one that fills my life with bliss She’s somewhere out there waiting just like me for that one kiss I waken covered in a sweat and notice it is she Laying right there still asleep with her arms holding me I feel her lips and hear her say “Is something bothering you?” “No my dear, how could it be, when my dream just came true?” [This message has been edited by Richy (05-04-2003 07:45 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Two eyes that see things about me that I find hard to see The person that I always hoped that one day I might be These lines are meaningful to me... You write so smooth~~ *s M |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Richy, I liked the entire poem. Too many favorite stanzas to quote. Enjoyed greatly, Pat  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I am so enjoying your words of being in love... this is charming, and more than precious... another romantic... sigh... good! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thank you nakedthoughts! Do you think I write smooth??? I think it’s this new pen I got... they’re pretty darn decent too... the brand is ummm Bic... Yeah I got a pretty good deal on a whole bag of ‘em... If you’d like I’ll send you one... lol Sorry, I don’t know what has gotten in to me tonight??? (you think this is bad, wait till you really get to know me!) I’m glad those lines were meaningful to you... They’re meaningful to me to... But seriously NT Thanks again for the nice reply! As always Pat, thanks so much, you’ve been so kind to me! Yes Sunshine.... a hopeless one at that... It means a lot to me to get such a nice reply from you! Thank You, so much, Talk soon all! [This message has been edited by Richy (05-05-2003 06:10 AM).] |
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