Open Poetry #26 |
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An Ageless Love |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
shut inside windows open wide i age 1000 years to your one these collagen-endowed furrows are guideposts to the one who lives inside, a wizened being sage of love and youth seeking more and more of you it may take another 1000 years or so to close the windows, and lock you inside my soul: a willing captive to our ageless love |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
very interestingly written ![]() "Now I'm convinced that he's heaven sent, and must be out of his mind- mama he's crazy, crazy over me." |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice.. I like love that's ageless - This is a lovely verse indeed... ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Veeeery inteeeeresting!---in a good way! ![]() Morning hugs, EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oooh lovely....ageless love..I like this...very much. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
sage of love and youth, and you! How nice your words are to read~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ivy Rose - I like the way you have sent this message. Takes some depth in reading, but it's there for sure... BC |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
You weave a tapestry with your words that make the soul reach out and feel it...I LOVE IT!!! |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
interesting write enjoyed the collagen line ![]() |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
IvyRose~ This sounds like foreverly to me~ ![]() Beautiful, just beautiful~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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