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Open Poetry #26

The me that died

MattGarcia
Junior Member

since 2003-01-04

Posts 19
Texas, USA

0 posted 2003-05-03 12:33 PM

The me that died

There once was a feeling
I could feel inside
It was a wonderful feeling
That has now died

I felt complete
So perfectly whole
Now inside
I feel a big hole

Nothing could touch us
Or so I thought
It was too perfect
We hardly ever fought

And when we did
I always just knew
That the next day
It would all be through

The new me was great
Such a happy young guy
It was such a tragedy
The way he had to die

[This message has been edited by MattGarcia (05-03-2003 12:36 AM).]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-05-03 01:11 AM

Matt:

goodness you just wrote
what I feel . . .

I know this (sadly) so well

nice write
xxoo

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2003-05-03 03:59 PM

Oh, I'm so sorry!
Maybe a new love shall capture you soon.

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