Open Poetry #26 |
Of Mist... |
Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Last night there came with evening's falling, on fading scape a gentle calling, A mist, a mist and nothing more, not a rain from heaven's floor, Pouring forth in gods' implore; t'was but a mist and nothing more. Not from above, not from below, with source unknown; nor who's bestow, T'was but a mist and nothing more, that came a calling at earthen door Upon the calm of eventide, surrounding all yet not beside. Did you hear the calling, calling of the mist? Gentle whispers to the soul, in seek of life's exist, T'was but a mist and nothing more, a' calling out in life's explore. [This message has been edited by Tim (05-03-2003 02:41 PM).] |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Lyrical and full of beauty...great job! Eric |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Whispering how quietly beautiful this is... Enjoyed, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Nice scheme of thoughts here...enjoyed very much. TD |
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