Open Poetry #26 |
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The Fabric Worn Thin |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Worn on the inside, like a comfortable dream Rubbed thin and shiny from pockets to seam Sometimes so thread bare to weary away As the last of the stitches lean to finest of fray Tattered worn patches that cover small holes Wispy in texture from bonnet to soles Clinging on tightly to faint placket baste Finally sheer in the weave, ribbons laced Faded and softened in whimsical blues Un-pressed and wrinkled, a giggled amuse Worked into fabrics that snuggle and sleek Leather to satin, as in love hearts turn meek Worn on the outside, courageous and calm Tough and yet tender, each beat counted on Sometimes to alter the pattern cut out Last to discard, and the first wrapped about Copyright Kkh 5/2/03 |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Worn, and thin, more comfortable than silk... yes... |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Faded and softened in whimsical blues Un-pressed and wrinkled, a giggled amuse Worked into fabrics that snuggle and sleek Leather to satin, as in love hearts turn meek Kathleen, I love this, especially this part. Your poetry almost sings to me, it's so pretty. ![]() Hugs, Ethel |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
A seamstress of words, you are TD. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Love your style! Warm hugs, EA |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I have this pair of jeans that has this hole in the back.....well, maybe I should just get rid of them?? What a poetic seamstress you are my friend, well done. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautifully expressed TD........Words well sewn together. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You are like a shawl over my shoulders. The very presence of your words are ever comfortable and warm. Beautiful, as always TD~ |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Reminds me of this huge cotton patchwork quilt I have - all ripped up and torn in places . . . but you know what? That is my favorite of them all and here . . . you patched those spots for me xxoo |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very expressive and full of beautiful images! Eric |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Kathleen, This is extra special and touches my heart like no other of your poems. Love this! Hugs, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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