Open Poetry #26 |
It’s Life After Death, its Paradise |
Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Well, The first thing I want to say that is this has nothing to do with me.. Its just something I wrote, and I hope some of you enjoy it. Things are not the same. Time fires at you with perfect aim, And then time came. Taking you away. You had no idea that you passed the past, As you think that it came to fast, But the speed of time has been cast, And then you know, you can’t stay. Time leads you to old age, Taking you through the second stage, You begin to shiver as you turn the page. You become more scared everyday. You feel this is your last day, But somehow you know that you’re okay, And you have realized this is the only way. Its time for you to go away. You’re free from your pain. Away from the strain, Its just something no one can explain. It’s life after death, its paradise. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Chris: me too . . . nice thoughts and the line: you had no idea that you passed the past truly insightful xxoo |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Thanks. I was thinking some people would have that problem with that line. But, Im glad ya understand it.. lol Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"It's life after death, it's paradise." Very nice...some refer to this as eternal life...James |
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