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Ladycat 
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX 
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The kiss that rocked the world moved the oceans Standing there eyes locked Hearts pounding Deep sensation There in my head everything screamed out your name I saw past those eyes Straight into your heart and soul Briefly, I saw a piece of me that I thought was lost in you There, in that moment, I was one with you Everything I ever wanted to be was there Yet, I will not hold you back I cannot be you "Goodnight Elizabeth"* Should I walk away knowing that someone else might be holding you later Lips touch Tongues intertwine Breathe I felt it through to my toes Mad electric tingles surge straight through me I know as I push you away That I will always feel the same Long I waited for this moment Reality crashes upon me like a brick from the sky As much as I hate it; I have to let you go Walking to the car Exchange of hugs and kisses on the cheek Hands locked As mine slides from yours I feel as if I have lost you forever Will you miss me Will you think of me Will you dream of me As I will miss you Dream of you Think of you I hold that moment in my heart as I anticipate your return For you know as I do that I you will always love me and I will always love you Love, Ladycat Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
It's so hard to let go of someone you love... you've captured this very well. I can really relate to this. Great writing.  Peace I leave with you, My peace I give unto you: not as the world giveth, give I unto you.--Jesus Christ |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Love cannot be forced onto someone. But You will find your true love. Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Vynette, I can relate ever so well to this feeling too, sweet friend, fear not, for he has a plan and though it may be confusing why this love wasn't meant to be, you will soon know why that happened and you will be blessed with a true new love that is bound to always make you feel special as you are deserving of true happiness! (sigh) You have my vote, dear friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vynette, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
There is that which is ment to be and that which is better left behind, but memories can be tough have no respect for time. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
That was some kiss!!! May you have many, many more in your life like that one! EA |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Nicely written... sweet and just a bit sour. Much enjoyed, thank you for sharing. Parasite "Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
It's nice to see you here! I like this.  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
so much longing, it's beautiful. Maree |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
It is hard to not be with the one you love and this poem expresses the longing |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Excellent write, Lady... I like this very much! *S* |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Very touching poem, kitten, and one I like. There are only a few lines that need a little cleanup, such as the * after "Goodnight Elizabeth" and the last lines, with an extra I in 'that I you will always'. Other than those two things, superb. Alicat |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent ...so well done! ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, do take Alistair's advice on the edits, and it will be a charming addition to the book... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
yes, a charming addition indeed... regards, sudhir |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
enjoyed the read Charisma |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a very good poem. I like it a lot...  Ethel...garysgirl |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
I enjoyed the glimpse. *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Brother did this hit home, and you sure get my vote! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, I do like this!! Gets my vote. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Woo, this one pulsates! Excellent expression of a hard but tender moment. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
I knew I saw you in here. I'm very glad of that, it's good to read you again. |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Agree with Alicat, but I know you will fix this.So after a wonderful heartfelt write, I must vote. Jason [This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (02-27-2003 11:19 AM).] |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
That was really powerful. Sometimes, some people just need to be let go. Well done, Ladycat.  ~Liz It's not having what you want, it's wanting what you've got... --Sheryl Crow [This message has been edited by skyshine (02-27-2003 01:39 PM).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
The anguish of missing a love is in direct measure to how much love was given...and I thought this beautiful, tender piece was so very touching........a place in the pages awaits this work, my friend!! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Wow, what a kiss  |
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leighsa Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 74Oregon, United States Of America |
I really Injoyed this poem... This was such a detailed piece and i know it will happen again maby more, But always keep that feeling imside for all eternity... Ashgiel |
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