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Underneath Velvet Skies |
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
we look up to the bright stars sparkling as clear as diamonds We gaze up at them as we lie on the grass on our soft blanket The night is very peaceful as we listen quietly to the music from the radio playing very softly Occasionally we hear the fish jumping in the water or a cricket by the river Then our song comes on the radio with the words flowing through and we again whisper in each other's ear "Do you know that I love you as much as the whole world and back around again" We get up and sway to the music slowly dancing under the stars in the moonlit night by the beautiful river |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Beautiful, I thought I had voted for this one.Happy to vote agian. Jason |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Wonderful. Just pretty Eliza Simmons |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Very touching. Joyce |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
very lovely.....each stanza holds such a releasing meaning....thank you for this one... Lauren~ Here I am |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Jason, Eliza, Joyce, Lauren Thank you all for reading and replying. I really do appreciate it. Heart Hugs to all, Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (03-15-2003 11:08 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay!!! Oh Ethel, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I am so happy you made this your second submission as I told you before it would be a great one, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, you have my velveteen vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is very lovely. Soft, and peaceful, and filled with love. Enjoyed. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yeah, Noah, I thought of what you said when I decided to submit a second poem. Thank you for your continued encouragement. Hugs, Ethel Anne, I'm glad that you like it. I love to read your poems. Thank you for reading and replying to this one.... Hugs to you both, Ethel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Why....YES of course!!!!! ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thanks, Nancy Lee .... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
What a romantic painting! I have done this with a 4 year old but the feelings were sure different, and we just counted stars LOL, great job on this. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
A big & A vote. |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
A snapshot of young love. Nicely done! SimplyGold |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sharon Spirit SG I thank each of you for reading and replying to my poem. I appreciate it. Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I love the romance of this... but even more, I love the love in it. *S* For as romantic as this is, it also reminded me of times with my little nephew... whom I love up to the stars and back again. *S* Beautiful! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
this is as soft as velvet and as bright as the stars. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Who wouldn't want to be in this setting? I know I would. You describe it so beautifully, Ethel. When you think you have heard it all, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This puts the "R" in Romance! I love evenings such as this one that you have so eloquently described! Absolute perfection! Warm hugs and a knowing smile, Linda |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful! Charisma |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Wow, this was great!! Vote cast! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful work, Ethel. All writing comes |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
yep...I remember this romantic write lovely poetess Ethel |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
This is beautiful, Ethel. Lovely thoughts in lovely verse. I enjoyed this. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Suthern, Kethry Chanson I really do appreciate all of your replies and your votes. You are all very sweet. Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Linda Charisma Dennis . . . Thanks ya'll. I appreciate all of you for reading, replying, and voting. Heart Hugs, Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (03-22-2003 11:50 AM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lone Wolf Janet Marie Vicky I really do appreciate all of you. And I thank each of you for reading, replying, and voting. Heart Hugs Ethel |
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