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A Lady’s Lace |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
A Lady’s Lace much to my delight I found some spider lace latitued strings of silk that a delicate touch had placed semitransparent labyrinth well-done masterful weave beautiful interlocking threads priceless gift the lady did leave glistening in the morning sun with special decorating flair dew adorned it with rainbows hanging the perfect prisms there a magical work of art stitched on the weeds found by me spun to form enchanted lace the fabric of my poetry "Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
yes...an excellent choice. One of my favorites! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is artfully composed, 1slick_lady ... beautifully and vividly descriptive. Very much enjoyed. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very well woven words, H... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is so gorgeously woven, sweet friend, you always create marvelous works of art, I want this wonderful painting to grace the pages of the next book, you have my vote, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Helen, I love the "fabric" of your poetry..... "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-18-2003 12:50 PM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Reminds me of Frost in the best of ways. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Nice work, Lady. Sandra |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I like it toooo Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
A lovely weaving Helen. Ed |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
And what a lovely web you weave. Well written. Parasite "Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlickLady~ Stunningly beautiful~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
helen, Yup, you'll always get my vote. Lovely. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is so pretty...makes me remember one I saw once blackberry picking |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Delicate like fine French lace. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I really enjoyed this one |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is really good....enjoyed very much!!!! Bridgette |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - your poetry is truly beautiful... My finger clicks... BC |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
What an intricate weave of words, and you certainly have my vote on this lovely piece. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ah nicely woven words here......enjoyed it Charisma |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Nicely written resume, Helen. How have you been? |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, yes, How I loved this one Helen. It gets my vote!! Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
beautiful words interlaced. I remember this one, enjoyed it then. *S M |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
a beautiful fabric indeed... regards, sudhir |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this Helen.. An excellent choice. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You are correct! The fabric of your poetry is indeed an enchanted lace. A beautiful entry. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
LOVE this, Helen. So beautifully penned, and an excellent choice for book submission. This is definitely one of my favorites of yours. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
lovely tatting there. Joyce |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Helen--Beautiful poem to one of my eyes favorite things. Thank you! |
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Flower Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 240California |
Lovely, simply lovely. Love reading all these great writes. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Anything to do with lacemaking has my vote - even if it is by spiders. Where's the voting thingy? Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I really like this poem and it's even been accepted into the book....sign your publishing agreement!!!!! Bridgette |
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