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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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 The art of Jeffrey K. Bedrick A gypsy woman searches for a quiet hidden place A meadow cool, with babbling brook A tree to shade her face A place where time exists no more Where love and hope abound What she has lost in former times In that place will be found... The search could last forever, far beyond this mortal plane But dreams are what has held her Also helped to keep her sane And when the pain of truth cuts deep So deep she falls apart A need is borne, to search for peace to heal her shattered heart... A gypsy-woman, lost in time, will search her lifetime through To find the place she knows exists It's there within mind's view And as I spin this tale of rhyme A part of me takes flight To search the regions of my thoughts within my darkest nights... Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen! ~~S~~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny - a'hhh the gypsy-woman writes another masterpiece... Click goes the square for the book... Hope you are well... BC |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
I like! I like a lot! Click goes the little box. This had a nice feel. Enjoyed the style and presentation. Peace to you and yours. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! And I know with all my heart you and so many others who follow their golden hearts will find what you are looking for, yay, God Bless You, this has my vote too, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunnyone, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Smile, my gypsy friend. Sandra |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I really like, so...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"But dreams are what has held her Also helped to keep her sane And when the pain of truth cuts deep So deep she falls apart A need is borne, to search for peace to heal her shattered heart..." love this part...and the whole poem with the pic...fantastic!!  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi BC, and thank you...your replies always brighten up my screen!! Yes, I am well, and just the same gypsy woman I have always been!! LOL!! Hi Andrew, and thank you for the ticked box! Glad you enjoyed this as much as I enjoyed writing it!! Hi Noah, and yes...like the Moody Blues said once: 'In the end, you are what you want to be'!! The main thing is to follow your heart, my lil brother!! Thank you! Hi Sandra, and this gypsy woman smiles as she flies from place to place, on the wings of words and music!! Thank you for being there for me... Hi garysgirl, and it's so wonderful when your friends support your efforts.....and it is much appreciated, too!! Thank you! Hi SEA, and thank you!! I admire your work so much, and you have been a constant source of inspiration to this poetess. I'm glad that you enjoyed this effort!! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen! ~~S~~ [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (02-17-2003 05:33 PM).] |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
thought of the gypsy in me..lovely poem to be in the adventurous romance section hehe [This message has been edited by ecrivan (02-17-2003 08:59 PM).] |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
I've already voted for this but, as I'm not sure why you posted it in here, I'll assume there's no harm in voting again. You already know how I feel about this piece. If this doesn't make it into Reflections then there is something horribly wrong with every one of us.  Parasite "Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I am this gypsy woman...you've got this gypsy's vote! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sunny1, this is a jewel of poem... Hearthugs2uDearPoetFriend... *~coco~* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I seem to recall your pen has found inspiration from a gypsy muse before. Lovely surreal imagery here. Good to read you again Sunny. Well done. " ... And think not, that you can direct the course of love ... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
How could I overlook at this one......beautifully penned!! enjoyed it a lot Charisma |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Excellent in its dreams. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Absolutely flawless, and I enjoyed this so much so I am certianly giving you my vote |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sunny, my friend, this is just perfect. Absolutely beautiful. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Oh this is soooo beautiful!!!!! LOVELY POEM!!!! Bridgette |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
...the regions of your thoughts are fascinating, creative, imaginative, and definitely worth exploring! Warm hugs, Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (02-20-2003 09:38 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Is the gypsy of your heart happy? I think so....  |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
I like how you extend the woman's search beyond her earthly presence. Lovely. *s |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sunny You weave a beautiful tale as only you know how. Nicely done! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ooh this is lovely!! A must for the book! ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny - you still write them with beauty, only softer somehow it seems. My vote is yours... BC |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Two thumbs up. I wish I write like that. My topics are usually less interesting. Very nice~Every girl has a dream within. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
quote: this lovely line brought to mind this one. *Well, lightning strikes, maybe once, maybe twice. Ah, and it lights up the night. And you see your gypsy,...... *stevie nicks--Gypsy lovely poem S1 JThere is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is lovely. Masterful. Joyce |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Loved this! |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Sunny, I'm glad I didn't miss this one, my friend. Hugs to you and John |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello ecrivan, and thank you.....yes, that would be a good section for this one! Hello Parasite, thank you for the second time! Yes, you're allowed to re-post poems in this forum that have been posted elsewhere. At least that's what it says in the Forum listing. But, I thank you for voting again! Hello PdV, and yes...I would say that you are a very poetic gypsy woman!! Thank you!! Hello Coco, and how good it is to see you! Thank you for your support here!! Hello Vandana, and so glad you enjoyed! Hello Janet Marie, and I thank you!! Yes, there is a gypsy woman who is part of me, and she makes herself known from time to time!! Hello Charisma, and I'm so happy that you enjoyed my efforts here....thank you! Hello bsquirrel! thank you, and may your dreams all be excellent! Hello Mysteria, and your vote is greatly appreciated I hope you know!! Thank you!! Hello Vicky!! Oh, it makes me happy to know that you enjoyed this one, as it was such a pleasure to write! Thank you, my friend! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen! ~~S~~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello Brigette, and thank you for your warm vote!! So glad that you felt the beauty that was meant to be in this work!! Hello Linda, and yes...life is for exploring, and discovery!! That is the gypsy that we all have in our souls...thank you! Hello Sunshine, and yes....this gypsy heart is very very happy, and complete!! Thank you so much!! Hello Chanson, and thank you for your insights, because what you feel here is just how it should be! Hello Ariana, and it is so special to have you here to read my tale...also because you know how true it really is!! Thank you my dear friend!! Hello Enchantress, and I do so thank you for your support here...it means so very much! Hello BC, and yes, 'softer' comes with the uniting of two gypsy soulmates!! The edge of searching is softened, and the discoveries begin!! Thank you so much, BC!!! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen! ~~S~~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello aries_luv_ppl!!! My friend, you have your very own unique style of writing, as we all do...that's what makes these forums so special!! What you may think is uninteresting, may be a light in a tunnel to someone out there reading! Keep sharing, because we all grow with each other here...and I thank you so much for the nice reply here!!! Hello Jamie, and I love Stevie Nicks...she has always been a fav gypsy to me!! Thank you so much! Hello Joyce, and thank you!! What a nice view of my work from a good friend!! Hello Munda, and it makes me happy that you loved this one...thank you!! Hello Michael, and you certainly know the story behind this work!! Thank you, my very dear friend, and I will give John your message, too!! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen! ~~S~~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is so marvelously written... Regards, Sudhir |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello Sudhir, and thank you so very very much! I haven't seen you for awhile, and it is so very nice to have you visit here today! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen! ~~S~~ |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Gotta love a gypsy... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Sunnyone, I love this. It is so beautiful. Both, the picture and the poem. |
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pjtalty Member
since 2002-07-17
Posts 111W.A., Australia |
This poem has a flow, a tone, a style and a theme for all: it will resonate with those who accept the challenge to search and will inspire those who need to start on that journey. I found, also, that it started up fresh melodies in my musical spirit through the attractive form and the simplicity mixed with elegance which adorns it. I'll look forward to reading it again in the anthology. Patrick Talty |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I guess it's too late to vote but this is lovely poetry. Joyce |
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