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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
 There are no explanations Trepidation's of lost souls Leave not, a forwarding address Should one somehow some way Live to see a different day When all that doesn't matter Lies undying in a simple moment Then there I hope and pray You will find me Never to be confused my love I shall not want, to be unwanted And the dreams held so close Shall never go undaunted By the flame of yesterdays candle The wind will still blow I know While grass will continue to grow green And future moons shall sing their tunes the same The only difference my love Is I, will not be there...to listen [This message has been edited by dhicks03 (02-16-2003 02:57 PM).] |
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Peter J Marcroft Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 265York, England |
This sounds tragic, almost like someone's suicide, harrowing end to what started so majestically, very good |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Dennis, this is so very heartbreaking, sweet friend, I too got the same thought reading this like Peter did, it is so very depressing to see many lose hope like this and my prayers are with all who struggle and cope with this! (sad sigh) This is very poignant indeed, sweet friend, BRAVO, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dennis, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Wonderful... I enjoyed...  |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a very sad poem... lost love, impossible love.. very well done. Vote!  Peace I leave with you, My peace I give unto you: not as the world giveth, give I unto you.--Jesus Christ |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Oh my... this is very close to something that just went on in my own life. It really struck me very deeply, and for this reason I'm going to vote. You wrote this very well, but I might be a little biased because of how personal this poem feels for me. Parasite "Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true. ~ Friedrich Wilhelm Nietzsche [This message has been edited by Local Parasite (02-18-2003 11:54 AM).] |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
sad |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
tragic is the right word, sad .. but it moves, and it's touching. the language was softspoken and adds to the feel. effectve write here, cool. |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Enjoyed this very much.  |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Thank you all for your warm comments about this piece.I appreciate them very much. Dennis |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good, Dennis! I enjoyed this very much! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very thought provoking write..much enjoyed Dennis. ~Hugs, Smiles, and a vote, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Well done, Dennis...much enjoyed. "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Beautiful, yet sad, Dennis. "Love makes the world go around" |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
YUes the time will come. Joyce |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sad, so very, very sad...but beautifully penned! Warm hugs, EA |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
 Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Absolutely brilliant writing and you sure do get my vote on this one with pleasure. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
A great little piece of sadness. Joyce |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
hi Dennis, Wonderful writing here, full of emotion and very much a topic most to understand, loved the wording used. Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! *click* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Trepidation's of lost souls Leave not, a forwarding address nicely written |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Just a bump. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this was really good, I hope it makes it in... |
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