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The Dance of Colours (re-post) |
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Mystic Mystron Member
since 2002-02-15
Posts 69North York .Ontario ![]() |
The light dances above. The red brushes up to the green. As the green turns to see the red, It is asked by the blue for the next dance. They begin to dance, a dance that flows, Flowing like water down a quiet river. It is a beautiful dance. The red looks on only to be interrupted. Red turns to see yellow bowing gracefully, “Could I have this dance?” Red and yellow join blue and red on the dance floor. As they dance a graceful dance other colours join them. All the colours join each other, Joining in beauty and light. They entwine to a wonderful sound, Nature’s song of love and light. But don’t look away for then they are gone, Dancing off into the dawn. You are a good poet as soon as you try to reach others with your words. You are a great poet when those same words touch your heart first. [This message has been edited by Mystic Mystron (04-20-2003 01:26 PM).] |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Lovely poem, it's getting my vote Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
don't look away... |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
The colors are dancing, and I plan on joining them. For what else dances as gracefully as colors at dawn? You've got my vote ![]() “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
what a nice picture they painted with the colors |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is very nice!!!!! Bridgette ![]() "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A very colorful write of nature's song and dance! Love & Light, EA |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Probably a little late to get into the book, but very vote worthy indeed and I happily voted. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Count my vote in too. ![]() Ethel |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Hope this one makes it. Joyce |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Yeah, I know, I'm biased cause I'm your wife.... but then again you know what a critic I can be.... and I really loved this one... I just thought you should know that I am officially voting for it... Love ya Sweetie, Sherry Cherish the good memories of the past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today. |
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