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IcyFlamez89
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since 2003-02-14
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Jersey City NJ

0 posted 2003-04-16 07:37 PM


You see me shiver in the Dark,
Cold and forgotten
Like my heart.
Joy seems to flee from me,
Love always rebukes me,
Even the Light shuns me.

The only comfort is the Night,
Whose subtle coldness holds me tight,
Makes my heart as hard as stone,
And the coldest eyes the world has known.
Pale and whitered is my skin,
Evil shines upon my grin,
For she knows I could have been,
Once a happy child.

I am pitied, I am scorned.
I am feared and
I am mourned.
But still I find no light.
I have everything but what I've yearned
Which is to let
My spark return,
become a Child of Light.

The closest thing I have for Love
Is the Icy Flamez I'm tired of.
It's gloomy joy,It's freezing heat,
It's empty fire, so bittersweet
But then you came, a Child of light
Your heart so pure, and burning bright.
Your smile so true, your joy so real,
You have everything I cannot feel.
Until you gave it all to me...

So now we're both in Night and Day,
Yin and Yang, as the world would say.
Perfectly balanced in everyway,
So now we are the Icy Flamez.



© Copyright 2003 George Salazar - All Rights Reserved
WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
1 posted 2003-04-16 07:41 PM


Wow! Now that's poetry.
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2003-04-17 10:40 PM


Wow! That was something else! --Translation: Pretty darn gooood!!!

Love & Light,
Earth Angel

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
3 posted 2003-04-20 06:14 PM


I'll second the above and casting my vote.

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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