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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
There stands a face in this place Fades from in to out of view Old to new. Shall it ever return, to more than merely a silhouette shadowed dancer with regret blows another evening wind down this well beaten path in the mind? Submissive to this pain One sometimes can only remember smiles as the miles pass on like the past they seem to vanish into the haze of yesterdays rear view mirror On sunny days now long ago They’d sit on a bank Watching the river flow And she’d look into his eyes He’d carefully disguised And ask, “Tell me, what is wrong”? Which he’d dismiss with answered kiss, And answer ”Nothing, everything’s fine” But all was not well, And how would he tell That he was now looking ahead To the future of this day today That would have him looking back to the past And that their love Would never last Yet still stays with him Yesterday, tomorrow, and today For he’d love her, then as if it were now, Even after the evening winds had died Always…and forever |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssssss) Oh Dennis, this is so sadly touching, sweet friend, this is so very true, though we should never dwell in the past all the time, it is important to introspect and understand the signficance of our pasts so we can correct our mistakes and learn from them and know who we are, whereas if we hide so much others can never understand how one feels and even more regrets will be made! (sad sigh) This is a tragic love story, sweet friend, I love it, you have my vote, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dennis, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Lovely. I cast my vote for this one. Joyce |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dennis, I like the way you write. This is a vry good one, as usual.....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
A very heartfelt write. it gets my vote. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Boy, is this wistfull, or what?! great way of bringing that out. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Warm and reflective, two winning qualities. Nicely done. *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Thank you ALL so much for your kind words regarding this piece. You made my day Dennis |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Submissive to this pain One sometimes can only remember smiles as the miles pass on like the past they seem to vanish into the haze of yesterdays rear view mirror *********************** Such well written suffering. Hope the next breeze brings smiles once again. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This poem showcases your talent very well! Warm morning hugs, Earth Angel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very nicely done.. Much enjoyed the read. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I can't possibly pick a favorite line....I'd have to copy the entire poem! I sure hope all these make it into the book... |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
You've got my vote |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Love your writes. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Just a delightful write, and I sure wish you luck in getting it into the book. God bless our soldiers, for it is now |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
It just simply tugged at my heartstrings.....  Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sue, your words are always so soothing and graceful--even when they are sad they are still soothing...it is as though they are carressing one's soul... I enjoy your writing very much and this one was especially lovely. Warm hugs, Linda |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
i am truly hoping to see this one in the book! such a stunning lovely write. take care. amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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