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War |
MERCURY Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 190Ireland |
The day started off thirsty with expectation, the ravenous mood needed its fix, without it , a feeling of impending doom seemed assured.The sullen time had arrived. Many had wished for this moment, eventually everyone succumbs to their muse. Men armed and eager with a dash of nervous recklessness, eyes vacant of empathy this truly was the ultimate cocktail brewed by Hades. War is to be waged. Why was not important. Throughout the history of past realms and empires many battles have been fought. Bloodshed and sorrow guaranteed. People have short memories and the innocent shorter lives. War is chaotically necessary. To some it is a chance of redemption, while to others it is simply a challenge or contest. It helps to feed the greedy and clothe the bashful. Mankind fails to realise their is enough land to shelter us all. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I liked it but the form made it a bit hard to follow |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah, I agree with Brad |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Make that 3 - wished it had been in a more poetic form. |
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swatcatpettus Member
since 2004-04-12
Posts 57CA |
Not to put any of you down or anything, but its still poetry, dosent matter the form, just the message it sends. |
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