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A2J
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since 2002-11-22
Posts 43
South Africa

0 posted 2003-04-14 12:39 PM



like a child

lightning flashes
and thunder crashes
raindrops thud
as i splash around in the mud
i'm once more like a child
so untamed and wild
giving in to temptation
not being part of formation

[This message has been edited by A2J (04-14-2003 02:17 PM).]

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Larry C
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1 posted 2003-04-14 01:14 AM


A2J,
Did you mean for this to be submitted for the book? You didn't check the submission box. Otherwise open posts are being place in Open #26.

A cute write and one that sounds tempting to act out. Trouble is we never get rain here in Arizona. Well almost never.

Welcome to Passions and I hope you like it here as much as I do.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2003-04-14 02:36 AM


sounds like fun! where's the box to vote for this?
dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
3 posted 2003-04-15 10:46 PM


wouldnt it be nice if we had more time to act like children!  

enjoyed the thoughts..

hugs, g

"laughter is the shortest distance between two people"  - victor borge

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2003-04-16 10:07 AM


Oh, I hear you! I know what you are saying! I'm with you on this one! Delightful!

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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somebody's dungeon
5 posted 2003-04-16 07:47 PM


Enjoyed the childlike feel of this.
passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2003-04-25 05:17 AM


wonderful!
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