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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
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I don't suppose that you would know what guilt does when it roams free, slithering through my open veins poisoning the all of me. With venom of lies, bitter cries all that I can not deny, heavy as lead, a slow descent through and around, down to the ground a bitter IV drip. Enough! It's made me sick. I hold in hand a small entity simple really, forgiving me, let go of all the hate you feel can't you see for me to heal you must accept, that's the deal. Please, let's move away, leave the hurt in yesterday. WhiteRose |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I like this, and love the message, lady. sometimes we have to let things go-- a message of inner healing here.  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Please, let's move away, leave the hurt in yesterday. This is great poetry Ms Rose and those last 2 lines.. great advice! Maree.  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
WR, Forgiving yourself...an excellent place to start.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Anne, yes, the pain must always be left behind for going on is pointless if the centerpiece is designed as thus! (sigh) This is very heartfelt, sweet friend, I send angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
"With venom of lies, bitter cries all that I can not deny, heavy as lead, a slow descent through and around, down to the ground a bitter IV drip. Enough! It's made me sick." I love the metaphor. WhiteRose. A touching write a usual When you think you have heard it all, |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
quote: I REALLY liked this one, Anne. Everyone needs to let things go....it always ends up for the best that way. Very well done.  ~liz Waited on a line of greens and blues, just to be the next to be with you.. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Thank you Serenity, I appreciate your comments, and the hug. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Maree, sometimes it's hard to move away. There are people who carry their hurt around like a crutch, and they will never let go of it. I appreciate the read, and the vote dear.  |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Larry, yes, that's true, and it was the hardest thing I've ever had to do, and I'm not quite sure I'm there yet. Thank you dear poet for your comments. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Noah, thank dear friend, your words are always so touching. I appreciate you so very much. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Dorene, thanks so much for reading and for your very kind words.  |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
liz, thank you. I only wish that the moving away would come. I appreciate your comments dear poet. |
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waldopepper Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 157Tennessee, USA |
Very happy to cast a vote for this jewel. You recognize such an important point in this lines; that to let go of the stifling hold, guilt is that which we must be moving away from. Wonderful words my dear friend. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Thank you Walter, for those very kind words. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Anne, very wise words. And written in a very tender way, too. You have my vote..  Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
My vote is cast for this deserving piece. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Wonderfully wise words... they get my vote! *S* |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Thank you SPIRIT, I apprecite the response, and the vote. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Thank you suthern, I appreciate you taking the time to read, and to vote.  |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
so sad..but well thought out Anne. I hope you are well ~A/M |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Feeling well expressed. Eliza Simmons |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Alice, thank you dear poetess. I'm as well as I can be in the midst of confusion these days.  |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Eliza, thank you dear friend for reading.  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
WhiteRose - a truly open write of feelings, I like this of you. My vote is cast... BC |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Thank you Bill |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
you know you got mine rose. -majnu |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sweet Rose of White, I hope you believe your own wise words, "Please, let's move away, Leave the hurt in yesterday." Poignant...poetic... Warm luvin' hugs, EA |
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sweetwater Member
since 2002-12-16
Posts 178Perth |
"Please, let's move away, leave the hurt in yesterday." Beautiful idea. [This message has been edited by sweetwater (03-30-2003 10:34 AM).] |
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Drummerboy06 Junior Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 46Indiana |
Hi WhiteRose, long time no see, eh? You havent been at SN for a while, why not? I could really use one of you critiques on a poem i recently written titled "A Pyro's Paradise." Well, if you didnt know who i was before, you should now. The poem was on target and pretty good, but i found a spot or two where the rhythm was a bit odd. No worries though, i barely noticed so it should be fine. Voting as we speak, you deserve it. Half the world is composed of people who have something to say and can't, and the other half who have nothing to say and keep on saying it. - Robert F |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Eloquent sentiments. Joyce |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Anne - Please, let's move away, leave the hurt in yesterday. You and me both - I loved this and yes - know it well . . . xxoo |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
a beautiful powerful post Rose and the one i shall keep in mind while i travel, it has haunting qualities :-) you have my vote dear friend "more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you" |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
majnu, thank you dear friend. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Linda, thank you for those very kind words. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
sweetwater, thank you for reading. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Pyro, you'll always be pyro to me, thanks so much for reading. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
hoot_owl_run, thank you |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Ethel, thanks for the bump |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Thanks Joyce |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
littlewing, thank you dear poetess, for reading and responding. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Hi Claire  Thank you sweet friend. I appreciate those very kind words. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
back to read again *smiles* |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
"Leave the hurt in yesterday" what a strong poem and what a beautiful line!!! worth a click! Neeraja |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! just awesome writing Anne! |
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Taco Jonez Junior Member
since 2003-04-04
Posts 22St. Petersburg, FL |
hahaha what a great poem, it starts off so thunderous like a rhino after a bull in a china shop! I thought the second stanza was just on pitch and wildly visual. This is the type of poetry that is overlooked in other lands of poetry(wink wink) My own comment was it was so strong off the bat that i was little bummed with the ending..it seemed like you ran of gas. The again maybe you need to have that visual sigh after such pouring of emotions. regardless i just loved it what a great poem. |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
This is a special poem, I like it a lot. It expresses deep feelings of lack of happiness and then it shows how to regain happiness. (¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wise words, WhiteRose! Nicely done! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
much feelings you have put into words |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Except for the hate part, there is someone I would like to send a copy of this to. Love your work. You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Better late than not at all. Glad that this was bumped, so that I could vote. Nice one Anne |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
littlewing, thanks for reading again dear lady. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Neeraja, thank you for reading and clicking |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Dixie, you're such a dear, thank you. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
So Zagg, you hail from Florida huh? I wonder if you have one of those cute little old southern accents Thanks for reading friend. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Kellie, thanks for reading. I appreciate it. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Denise, thank you. I appreciate your comments |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
QjQ, Thank you for taking the time to read and respond. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Temptress, I know what you mean. Hate is a really strong word. The person I wrote it for...the word was fitting. Thanks for reading. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Dear Wranx, I say that quite often myself. I wonder, does that mean I'm just late a lot? Probably. Thanks for reading. |
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