navwin » Archives » Reflections on the Web » Making a comittment, breaking a promise
Reflections on the Web
Post A Reply Post New Topic Making a comittment, breaking a promise Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
EllinneT
Junior Member
since 2003-04-04
Posts 12


0 posted 2003-04-10 03:24 PM


Making a Commitment, Breaking a Promise

I thought i knew you,
          until you used me.
        You lied about saying,
             you loved me,
      You lied about everything,
         you said or did to me.
            You played me,
like I was one of,
your easy video games.
Those two years,
I shed so many tears.
   You called me easy,
and acted like what we had together,
didnt even matter.
You deney all the things you say,
so you wouldn't lose a friend.
    Deep down inside,
I know you can't let go,
cause when I see you two together,
    you always let it show.
I know when you get what you want from her,
     you will break her heart,
       like you once did me,
and would soon come crawling back,
     begging on your knees.
      I thought this is what I had with you,
when you made a commitment,
    and broke a promise.
I know that love is as crazy,
     as it seems, but when you find that special person,
you want to spend all eternity with them.

                   EllinneT


© Copyright 2003 EllinneT - All Rights Reserved
leighsa
Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 74
Oregon, United States Of America
1 posted 2003-04-10 03:33 PM


Hey neal,
(8) I FEEL GOOD( DUNNA DUNNA DUNNA DUNNA)
I KNEW THAT I WOULD(DUNNA DUNNA DUNNA DUNNA)
ASHGIEL


Mistletoe Angel
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
2 posted 2003-04-10 07:19 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Yes, if you really love someone you want to spend the rest of your life with that person, and my heart goes out to all who are left with broken hearts this way! (sad sigh) Never make promises you can't keep, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend. thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

carol
Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624
Florida USA
3 posted 2003-04-12 03:37 PM


This is so sad

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Reflections on the Web » Making a comittment, breaking a promise

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary