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waldopepper Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 157Tennessee, USA 
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The old woman, driven by pain, and come to her end battling no more the purchase of breath, sees beyond her wizened degrade, assuredly unafraid of the life that no longer depends On powders and cures, professionals' demure to the needs of a stretched and wearied soul, that needs not regain thru' some prolonging stain her length of days now finite, and sure. What of the loved ones, that gather to bedside in reach of a hoped-for and hesitant hand, laying to rest in this time of their duress the last pound of flesh from the old woman's hide-- Or hidden away from the inglorious delay, the widow's release to newly-partner'd peace? They might soon realize in the drying of eyes the woman's turn to love, to laugh, and to play. [This message has been edited by waldopepper (04-11-2003 02:34 AM).] |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I like the message of hope in this one. Joyce |
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waldopepper Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 157Tennessee, USA |
Thanks Joyce. A very good friend's Mother passed away this morning. Her Mom was the kind of person that everyone came to for support and love and kindness. She was a most giving soul. Now its time for her to get back some of what she gave for so long. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
When someone passes away and is really sick or elderly, comfort can always be found in the fact that they aren't hurting or lonely anymore. Your poem told this very well. Very vote-worthy. Hugs, Ethel |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
(drying eyes~~~~ swallowing hard) This poem brought me to my knees.... and to tears of a grief that I do not know first hand yet..... and hope will not be too soon. I just recently moved away from the city where my grandparents live, too far away to make regular visits.... I worry about them both because they are in their late 70's and early 80's.... Grandma is heavy and arthritic, and tires easily...and Grandpa has Parkinson's... Luckily, my uncle still lives in the area. But I know that every day for them is precious... and they are precious to me.... they raised my brother and me for the most part.... and put up with a lot.... getting off track.... Voting..... Sherry Cherish the good memories of the past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Beautiful! |
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh Waldo how beautifullly you have summed up feelings I know only too well ~ "They might soon realize in the drying of eyes the woman's turn to love, to laugh, and to play." Such a glorious thoughts as they move on. Bonnie |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What a lovely poem! --It would make such a wonderful gift for your friend. I hope this poem makes it between the covers of Reflections, not only for its poetic merit, but for the treasured family keepsake a book with this poem would be. Love & Eternal Light, Linda |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Walter, I agree with Linda. This is a treasure, meant to be kept and cherished. Simply lovely my friend.  |
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pjtalty Member
since 2002-07-17
Posts 111W.A., Australia |
This poem has the virtue of brevity. This allows it to be understood only if other features, such as an appropriate tone of gravity and respect and clarity of expression, are present. You have created a fine poem here by paying attention to such technical issues. For me, the poem created emotions in me akin to those felt by you and which inspired the piece. It has my vote! Patrick Talty [This message has been edited by pjtalty (04-11-2003 10:01 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) God Bless You, sweet friend, we must never take for granted the ones we love and as long as they always know we are here for them, they will always find solace in the warmth we offer, and as our loved ones times come, they will always feel free and proud! (wipes tears) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walter, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-12-2003 03:14 PM).] |
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cupcake Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 116 |
Emotional write. I'm a reader - not a writer. |
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