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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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Silent spirits soar Surrounding my soul with light Sweetest memories May ripples of LOVE |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Kacy, this is a gorgeous senryu, sweet friend, this is the first one I've seen in here and we sure can use such gorgeous senryus in this wonderful book as this would certainly light it up! (kiss on cheek) This is scintillating, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you, Noah. Yes I would love to see more haikus and senryus in here also, as this shorter style would allow more poets to be included within these passionate blue walls. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Kacy, you reckon? that's very considerate of you but starved readers like me hunger for more from you  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
kaile, I'm going to come right through the screen and hug you  you are so generous and kind to my muse |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kacy~ Silent words surround This lovely ink of quilling Met with softest sighs~ *Inspiring HUGLETS to you* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hugs back to you, Marge. You've always been here for me with warmth, since the day I joined this board.  |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is so uplifting |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Yes... I can feel this! and Yes.... I am voting! A beautiful Senryu. Maree |
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winston Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 204NW of Eden |
Big Brother Ron, I think there should a section in the anthology where it's just short poems like this one. What do you think?  It's amazing I won. I was running against peace, prosperity, & incumbency. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
beautiful... regards, sudhir |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Indeed those would be sweet memories--but you should look around you now! There's a heavenly host holding you in gentle surround! Love & Light, Linda |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Just love the consonance and wording of this. Who says Senryu aren't deserving of a little further technique than just counting syllables, eh?  Very nice work. Sweet memories indeed. Parasite "Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kacy, Short and to the point. How did that happen?  Gets my vote!If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Much said in few words |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I really love this!!!! Bridgette |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Beautiful words.And alot of skill to use so few to say so much. Jason |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
We should have two or three pages dedicated to Haikus, Senryus, Tanka.... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Kacy   Here I am with my wave and my vote... . Hugs from Ethel |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Lovely. *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ding! Into the book it goes....> |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
YES!!! Simply beautiful!! ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you friends! It will be so cool to be in one book with so many great poet friends. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
very nice haiku......enjoyed it a lot Charisma |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanks Vandana, and Charisma. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I see I didn't comment on this the first time I read it -- I think the book should have a section on short poetry -- this, haiku, cinquain and the like, and this poem belongs in it. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Hmmm...I thought I had already replied to this. Glad I came across it again tonight. Beautifully penned, Kacy. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Midnitesun - short and with meaning, nice, and my vote... BC |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you dear passionate friends, for your kind replies and support. You are all part of the reason I continue to write my heart. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is lovely, K... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Absolutely beautiful! (checkmark) Liz |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Kacy - I'm going to vote for this senryu, but you have GOT to understand that senryus bring out the kitty-kicker in me, and I can't stop my toes from tapping. Please, please, please don't make my Mr. (Kitty-kicker) Hyde come out. OK? I'm trying really hard to be a good boy and not kick those little ktities. BTW - I love your senryu. It is very tight. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Nan, Liz, LngJhn, thanks to each of you for reading and commenting on this senryu. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very well written  [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (03-09-2003 03:14 PM).] |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Simply beautiful. |
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