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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA 
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A hush upon a Winters dawn as silence deep and quiet still invades the corners of the earth and settles in the mind and heart beating ever softly with the gentle fall of snow covering the winters chill and branches bare of promised Springs gentle song of births renewed hope that ever sings the joy found in the heart this quiet morn of deepened silent snows remind to still the thoughts and ponder thus Gods ever present promised truth in the still small voice of His heard in silent Winters dawn. A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. [This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (02-15-2003 09:08 PM).] |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ellie a very beautiful and worth submission but you did the same as I did you forgot to tick the subit for book box (the brown one) so go back and edit so we can vote on this lovely piece.  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay!!! Oh Ellie, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I just love winter mornings liken that in the countryside where I can see stellar jays and flickers on my bird feeder and the breeze and the light come over the mountains, yay! (kiss on cheek) This is absolutely serene and comforting, sweet friend, I too have my vote on this, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ellie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-15-2003 10:30 PM).] |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
This most certainly gets my vote. I be me BUT who does me be? |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
and mine too!  |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh Ellie, this is beautiful! I am so glad you submitted it for the book!  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful!!! Charisma |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is lovely, Ellie...  |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
I think all that haiku has really given you tons of practice capturing nature and learning to make beautiful descriptions, because every time I read your work I can just feel the scene. You've really got a rare talent for this kind of poetry, you know. My vote is cast. Parasite "Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I enjoy this quiet. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
This is such a beautiful piece, Ellie. I absolutely love it. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
As always beautiful! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
I'm not sure if I've had the opportunity to comment on this poem before, but I do love the flow... One can read your poem all the way through without need for pause. It flows perfectly from beginning to end leaving so many subliminally soft images behind on the mind to later ponder. God bless you my friend and hope to be reading your poem in the coming book. -Bob |
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jbouder Member Elite
since 1999-09-18
Posts 2534Whole Sort Of Genl Mish Mash |
The poem flows nicely. Well done. I enjoyed the read. Jim |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This reminds me of home.....VERY NICE!!!! Bridgette |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A hush upon a Winters dawn as silence deep and quiet still invades the corners of the earth and settles in the mind and heart beating ever softly with the gentle fall of snow covering the winters chill ============================ I dont know which is more lovely.. the title, the poem, or your bright smile. All of the above gave me a big smile and felt like a warm hug in winter.  " ... And think not, that you can direct the course of love ... |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Beautiful, beautiful. A worthy candidate for the book. Joyce |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
My oh my, this has to be in the book yes indeed! Just lovely. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Absolutely lovely. *S* |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
gentle comes to mind when reading this... enjoyed very much! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ellie girl...I'm so glad you're going to have a submission for the book...this is a wonderful example of Reflections...  |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
You make the cold of winter feel so warm and bright. *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a very beautiful poem, and a very good selection for submission to Reflections. Hugs, Ethel  |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Soft and beautiful. An uplifting, feel good poem. Enjoyed greatly! Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Nicely done, Ellie. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very gentle and inspiring poem Glad you subnitted it Liz |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
I love the winter. And thus, end up reading most any poem mentioning winter. Wish there was any hint of spring at all, though; I came home from California to the coldest week we've had in years. Brr. Loved the poem. remember the sound |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ellie, A lovely write, you have my vote. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very beautiful, Ellie (I love Winter, although this has been an exceptionally cold one) *s M |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Lovely |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
very beautiful... :-) |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Ellie, Winter is not my season, but this poem could change my mind. Beautiful! Hugs, Marti |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Yes, my friend this is simply wonderful--It has my vote. But tell me something am I the only one who percieves the form of a snow man hidden within the form of this Gem or what???? Thanks, David Every Day's a Blessing |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
This is lovely. A wonderful submission and noteworthy. Thanks SG |
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