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In The Middle of the Moonlight |
dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
in the middle of the moonlight he calls me beautiful-- sleep releases me and my eyelids slowly rise to show me this man before me who has awakened in the night... through the blinds on my window moon-paint laces his loving face i smile as my eyes seek sleep again he kisses me and melts back down beside me he loves me... even when he wakes in the middle of the moonlight he calls me beautiful... -dgvarner 9-10-02 |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is lovely |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
WHITEROSE..thank you for reading! glad you enjoyed.. hugs, g "laughter is the shortest distance between two people" - victor borge |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Yes - and a great choice for submission.... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What a lovely way to wake up in the middle of a moonlit night... Love & Moonlight Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (04-08-2003 11:18 AM).] |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
wonderful ( as is almost always the case with your poetry ) J There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wonderful penned as always Charisma |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Well, you already know that I love this one. Glad YOU thought to submit it. Love ya, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Wow. *G* And I only have a couple of cat faces wondering if it's breakfast time??? Darn!!! LOL I like this very much! *S* [This message has been edited by suthern (04-08-2003 02:32 PM).] |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
A beautiful poem and what a lucky girl! I missed this one before, but glad I found it. I was laughing at Suthern, as I know that one with my cat right beside me under the covers LOL. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OH WOW!! This is every woman's dream! Beautiful...gets my vote! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Lovely way to awaken indeed. Joyce |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
OH YES!!!! Very nice way to wake up!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ohhh simply beautiful dg ~ tender whispers in the "middle of moonlight ~ Love it!!! Bonnie |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Lovely write - my couch potato border terrier wakes me up, sometimes at moonlight to tell me she needs out. Not quite the same? No! guess not. Oh well!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 I happily voted for this gentle poem. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
gale, you need to post more often...you really know how to tug the heartstrings with your new sweetly romantic pieces... i liked this line best moon-paint laces his loving face |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DG~ I'm with Vicky on this one ! Loved it the first time I read it ... and still ........~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Love it! |
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