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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind 
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Yesterday Beauty When the flowers were bright, You claimed I didn't know love, So when the autumn came, And winter went, I took care of them. Everyday... I added more time In reminiscence Of yesterday beauty. And so time flied by Another year passed, My mind is delightful- In searching for resemblance. Yet when I go to yonder place, An unexpected scene blow me away ...Changes has altered My memories that I once adored. Maybe your words were wise, Nevertheless, Childhood has its own love. I can't denied That it was but a dream; Yet you can't be right, If you said all there was none. When the flowers were bright, You claimed I didn't know love, So when the autumn came, And winter went, I took care of them. Staying...to keep dreams alive. (c)Feb 26, 2003 Eliza Simmons Eliza Simmons |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is lovely, Eliza. Joyce |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is really pretty, Eliza. I like it. Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Eliza, this is lovely, sweet friend, you certainly know what love is and compassion is what helps the flowers grow deep in the soil where the foundation of love rests! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Nicely done and the repetition brought me back to tie it all together. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Very nice. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Things past and things gained. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very lovely Eliza! ~Hugs~ ~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
---lovely, Eliza...simply lovely... Love & Light, Earth Angel |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I particularly like the way you repeated the verses... nicely done! *S* |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Eliza, yup, sometimes holding on to those dreams in this world of relentless change is what keeps us human and sane...i enjoyed... wondering though if too much dreaming is a form of escapist behaviour.. |
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Flower Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 240California |
Escapism or not my vote is in for this piece of writing. Love reading all these great writes. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
I see your talent and your love's garden both blooming like most beautiful flowers here in your poetry. Great job. -Bob |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
click click. [that means i'm voting by the way]. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
 Just in here |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
beautiful writing! just lovely...you got my vote take care. amy  "love is like a butterfly-- |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh, lovely! got my vote! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Very nice..... Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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