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Into The Mystic |
dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Through the winter snows Summer rains and autumn winds I’m sorry for what you have learned Tearing apart without a fight Your face wears a time line Into the depths of tomorrow As if a thought will take you where You always wanted to go When the day fails to dawn Nights no longer cold as hearts Time to you no longer matters Your eyes cease to tell where you’ve been Where love hides between the then and the now You’ll come upon yourself in a way like never before And your deep sense of purpose Will somehow peacefully embrace upon you This long and winding road, into the mystic Is where you were looking for…all along [This message has been edited by dhicks03 (04-06-2003 11:52 PM).] |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is a lovely posting. Joyce |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Your writing is always most enjoyable. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
dennis - you know this brought me to Van Morrisons' "Into the Mystic" - you penned that perfectly here - nice write xxoo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ah, yes! The long and winding road into the mystic... Love & Light, EA |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Your eyes cease to tell where you’ve been Where love hides between the then and the now Splendid writing PoetFriend... *~coco~* |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
brilliant write! lovely and vivid imagery that brings all kinds of ideas to the mind! take care. amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Dennis, this is lovely, Van Morrison was the first thing that came to my mind seeing the title too and you certainly have his poetic charm, keep embracing the surreal, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dennis, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Very nice.....I really enjoy your poetry!!! It has a soothing and peaceful sound to it when I read it!!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
~bumb and vote~ Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what JP said |
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