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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Staring at the white shadow As if it were so real The gaze made of simper Unable to move or feel As I listened to its mournful cry Feeling its pain and regret As if were familiar I suddenly came to realize I was merely, searching my heart. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
YES!!!!  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Believe me, dearest friend, I used to feel this way myself, I felt like a poltergeist in the world, not even transparent like Casper, then when I let myself embrace His light I knew that was an exaggeration! (sad sigh) Always follow your heart and you can crawl out of the shadows, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dennis, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Even though this one hurts, Rick, it's written beautifully..  "Love makes the world go around" |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Thank you all for your kind word. Ethel, Rick? It's Dennis No problem |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
very sad, but well done. |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
I liked this poem a lot because I like to read things that I can be compassionate to, and this poem welled tears in my eyes. GOOD JOB!! (¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨) |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
"I suddenly came to realize I was merely, searching my heart." A stark and solemn realization, well writ. *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Powerful realization. Good work. All writing comes |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dennis, I'm sorry...  I know your name is dennis. Your's and Rick's writing kind of remind me of each other, I guess. You are both excellent poets. Sorry!!!  Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The mournful cry in your heart echoes across the miles... Love & Light, EA [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (04-04-2003 04:26 PM).] |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Nicely done. Joyce |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Yep. I'm there. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Well done, my vote is in. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes! I'm votin'! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
yes shadows show many thoughts |
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