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Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2003-04-04 03:25 AM

I've made a picnic basket
With champagne just for two
Here we lay upon the hillside
And admire the stunning view

We inhale the salty air
And view the ocean down below
The clouds drift by so slowly
As the tides ebb and flow

A seagull glides by gracefully
As he heads on out to sea
This day is picture perfect
I feel much love surrounding me

So much beauty all around us
The Summer sun warms our skin
In just a matter of time
Our sweet loving will begin

And when the day has ended
Just as the moon comes into view
We'll succumb to our desires
And I'll lose myself in you

* * * *

"When I'm falling in love
no safety net is required."

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

[This message has been edited by Suetang (04-04-2003 05:22 PM).]

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2003-04-04 08:14 AM

...and I lost myself in your words...
You write of romance with such sweetness and grace.

Love & Light,
Linda

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-04-04 09:09 AM

Wow Sue! I think this is the best of yours..
Of course I feel that about each one!

~Hugs & a vote!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2003-04-04 09:39 AM

Oh my, I really loved this. The beach, the love, great write.

Susan

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

4 posted 2003-04-04 11:20 AM

Lovely,lovely. You make me homesick for my youth. Love, Joyce

[This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (04-04-2003 11:21 AM).]

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

5 posted 2003-04-04 12:41 PM

Sue, I just loved this and makes me so want to sit on that hillside with my Hon.

One of your very best....hugs for peace.
Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2003-04-04 12:46 PM

Suetang - I love your picnic and the way you wrote about it... My vote for this...

BC

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-04-05 05:59 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I dream too of going to the mountains with my future love and having a romantic picnic with her and sharing the beauty of nature with her! (kiss on cheek) Yay, I love this, you have my heartfelt vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

8 posted 2003-04-07 09:02 PM

sue,

so romantic *sighs* this was such a lovely
poem and thought. i love your closing line
especially. take care.
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

9 posted 2003-04-08 12:35 PM

A delightful write - my vote is happily cast.

Flower
Member

since 2003-03-15

Posts 240
California

10 posted 2003-04-11 04:42 PM

Wonderful poetry.

Love reading all these great writes.
I write not!

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

11 posted 2003-04-11 08:53 PM

I'm smiling... So who needs a net anyway?...

Poet4Christ
Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 211
Oklahoma City

12 posted 2003-04-12 11:20 PM

Sue this makes the second of your poems that I really enjoyed. Here's a bump and a well deserved bump. I hope it helps. God bless you - Tim

He that trusteth in his own heart is a fool: but whoso walketh wisely, he shall be delivered. Proverbs 28:26

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

13 posted 2003-04-12 11:56 PM

Sue: Very romantic poem and a beautiful setting you've described.

Betty Lou Hebert

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

14 posted 2003-04-13 06:19 PM

*Sigh*

Here's my vote.

Sunkissed.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

15 posted 2003-04-14 02:43 AM

Sue, you are the most romantic woman I have ever known in cyberspace...truly wonderful!

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

16 posted 2003-04-14 03:35 AM

Sue,
ps is right. Gotta love a romantic! Here's my vote for another good write.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

17 posted 2003-04-14 04:31 PM

To be so lost in love ..... that all the beauties around us are multiplied,
and everything is perfect!

~Sheri

"Don't wait for your ship to come in ...
Swim out to it"

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

18 posted 2003-04-17 04:14 PM

So beautiful and romantic. *S* I like this very much! *S*

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