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edh Member
since 2003-03-26
Posts 111 |
I've taken the cross right off of the trees. You say you want someone I know that it's me. Everything looks ordered in your tiny world. The kids are with mommy. Your story's unfurled. People like to talk about people who talk about people who like to talk. Imagine all the people who walk by all the people who hate to walk. I'v taken the guts right out of the fish. I know that you're hungry so pull up a dish. Things seem convenient almost everywhere. The kids home in bed. Who says "life aint fair." Some people say they look like hell in the morning but look like hell for most of the day. Imagine all the people who imagine someone gives a damn anyway. I've taken desire right out of the bed. You say you're on fire so lay down your head. When the drug of sleep falls on his face. How can there not be a cup for the race. So let those people who talk about people who like to talk, talk. And forget all the people who stalk the people who never stalk. You take the night right out of the song. I honor light and it won't be long. When that old-fashioned home is built on the rock. No conflict in glory. No scattering flock. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
'I know that you're hungry, so pull up a dish'....I love this poem, and it has so many great thoughts, all put together in a way that keeps your eyes moving, and your head thinking!! Looks like you are new here, so let me say my 'Welcome to Passions'\!!  Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Yes, this is so very true and we must never judge a book by its cover and respect everyones time when one wishes to speak even if it may not be agreeable! (sad sigh) Sadly so many citizens are being denied recently, I hope this changes, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Well I'm still working on the entire meaning of this one but here is my vote. Joyce |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
AWESOME WRITE!!!  (¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨) |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I'm intrigued..... Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
hehe...I like this a lot....you've got my vote and then I'm going to read it again... Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i will have to come back later to get a deeper look at this but hey, that was a real fun read, though i sense undercurrents of seriousness....i vote for this double-layered piece |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I love the way you use language in this. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
(Smiles) I do think that you've captured many aspects of human nature very well here with your words and I also believe and have hope and faith that the promises that your poem mentions at the end will certainly come true. Good job. -Bob |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very interesting write! Much enjoyed! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
So much truth and power in your words, edh. Excellent write! You have my vote! All writing comes |
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edh Member
since 2003-03-26
Posts 111 |
Thanks a lot lone wolf and everyone else. You ease my mind in so many ways with comments and recognition. Much Love Peace and Joy to you all. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Verrrrry interesting!--the concept and the verbiage! Love & Light, EA |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
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lorenlynn Member
since 2003-01-27
Posts 203California Beaches |
Very interesting. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
i really liked this alot--it spoke to me! you got my vote, take care. amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Most interesting - I voted for this. |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
edh, lightly said , but very powerful. Good luck!! mysticpoe |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Really great you have my vote Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great concept! i found this to be sort of inspiring! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very interesting write held my attention |
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