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BSC
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0 posted 2003-03-28 09:33 PM



I watched as two wee ones were perched on a cloud,
Smirking and giggling and laughing out loud,
They'd whisper a thought into each others ear,
And heaven just smiled as they filled it with cheer.
Little ones dressed in soft pink and blue,
Downy soft wings with which they made do,
Halos made up of rosebuds and greens,
Even a few wearing flannel and jeans.
I saw little cherubs swinging on stars,
While others sat strumming on tiny guitars,
Some chose to go on a fast comet ride,
While using its tail as a heavenly slide.
As wishes and prayers came up from below,
They'd catch them and somehow let us all know,
That as twinkling stars shine in the night,
Sweet little angels are showing their might.
Swinging and sliding and playing so hard,
Yet keeping us safe in God's big backyard.


© Copyright 2003 Bonnie Church - All Rights Reserved
Lighthousebob
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1 posted 2003-03-28 09:41 PM


A delightful addition for the anthology and, now, my vote's been cast for all the dear and most precious angels everywhere. God bless.

-Bob

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2 posted 2003-03-28 10:09 PM



Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-03-28 10:11 PM


Beautiful..love this!
Casting my vote!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Pilgrimage
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4 posted 2003-03-28 11:14 PM


This is precious!

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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5 posted 2003-03-28 11:15 PM


I love Angels, and I love
this poem.....
Voting  

Hugs,
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (03-28-2003 11:16 PM).]

Janet Marie
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6 posted 2003-03-28 11:21 PM


Even a few wearing flannel and jeans.
I saw little cherubs swinging on stars,
While others sat strumming on tiny guitars,
Some chose to go on a fast comet ride,
While using its tail as a heavenly slide.
As wishes and prayers came up from below,
They'd catch them and somehow let us all know,
That as twinkling stars shine in the night,
Sweet little angels are showing their might.
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BONNIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Welcome back to the blue....
and I see you brought your cherub muse
Cute poem girlie!! Love the imagery and creativity.

"and when we get to the pearly gates ...
we'll find what we called our sins were just mistakes."

Tom Kimmel


Angel
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7 posted 2003-03-28 11:25 PM


I LOVE it! You've got my vote, sweetie.

www.enterthemuse.com  


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Beneath the northern stars
8 posted 2003-03-28 11:44 PM


Awww this is so sweet I love angels!

~Liz

Waited on a line of greens and blues, just to be the next to be with you..
~Mr. Big

Justbleu
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9 posted 2003-03-29 12:57 PM


This is darling BSC....LOVE IT!!!!!
Perfect for the book!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


Nan
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10 posted 2003-03-29 07:02 AM


So wonderful to see your submission, Bonnie...
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11 posted 2003-03-29 01:40 PM




(smiles) Yay! Oh Bonnie, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love cherubs so much and believe they are always watching over our children with love and comfort and playing happily over the clouds! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bonnie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Alicethruglass
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12 posted 2003-03-29 04:55 PM


a lovely selection
I collect angel thoughts
~A~

Joyce Johnson
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13 posted 2003-03-29 05:10 PM


An adorable, beautiful, well done posting.  Joyce
Jason Lyle
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14 posted 2003-03-29 08:00 PM


My vote, a cute and wonderful submission.
Jason

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
15 posted 2003-03-29 10:59 PM


BSC - this is precious about the little ones in God's back yard. My vote is cast...

BC

Sunshine
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16 posted 2003-03-30 07:57 AM



Well now look what I see...
a poem with initials BSC...

FINALLY!  

        Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?...

Earth Angel
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17 posted 2003-03-30 10:15 AM


This is so delightful that you have my heart fluttering with joy!  

ADORABLE!!!

~ May the Light of the heavens guide you on your path in life...

Peace, Love, Joy,
Earth Angel

Mark Bohannan
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18 posted 2003-03-30 12:08 PM


This one makes me want to go lay in a field and lose myself in the sky.  Wonderful write and of course I do so love a good one with rhyme.  casting my vote here.
Paul Wilson
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19 posted 2003-03-30 11:49 PM


BSC~ Your soft spoken words paint a very vivid picture of God's back yard.Enjoyed very much...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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