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Mandie
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since 2003-03-20
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0 posted 2003-03-27 09:32 PM



         People laugh, people cry, People live
                     People die
        We all love, we all hate, we all
           destroy , we all create
     Where the story begins, is where the roads ends
          Nothing makes sence so we start all
                   over again
       Tears of joy, tears of pain , where
          Happiness is the highest
                   rein
        People smile, People frown, When someone
              screams there is no sound
       Echoing hills and trembling waters
       soaring eagles and squirmming otters
       You push and push but nothing moves
     You sink your fingers into the deep hard  
                    grooves
      Your lost but where your supposed to be
        Your running nowhere but your spirit
                 is soaring free
        People sing, People stare, People hate
                    People care
      But most of all we love instead of hate
    Because love opens that rusty old gate
           As a rider; His horse he mounts
          Love rises above all and is all
                  that counts


© Copyright 2003 Amanda Erin French - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2003-03-27 10:33 PM


Love makes the world go 'round!--- and that is what really counts!  

Warm welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

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2 posted 2003-03-27 11:42 PM




(smiles) Oh Amanda, yes, love is the answer and many still miss this simple point but imagine if all did how much more beautiful the world can be! (kiss on cheek) This is well-written, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amanda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

DawnG
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3 posted 2003-03-28 12:37 PM


Beautiful.

                 Dawn

garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-03-28 12:55 PM


I like this It's an excellent
book submission.  


Hug,
Ethel

leighsa
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since 2003-02-27
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5 posted 2003-03-28 02:32 PM


hey mandie, I really loved this one of your's
It was a truly beatiul....
Cya at school,

Ashgiel


Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
6 posted 2003-04-04 08:56 PM


mandie,


nice poem about life. i haven't read
your work but this was a true pleasure.
take care.
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

lorenlynn
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since 2003-01-27
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California Beaches
7 posted 2003-04-04 09:32 PM


Oh! yes I really liked this.

Where we going?
To the top.
What top?
The toppermost of the poppermost!

Joyce Johnson
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8 posted 2003-04-04 09:46 PM


And so did I.  Joyce
SPIRIT
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California Desert
9 posted 2003-04-11 10:25 PM


Me too!
Titia Geertman
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10 posted 2003-04-12 02:30 PM



Me too, voted already

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

passing shadows
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displaced
11 posted 2003-04-15 02:43 PM


Alright! Love this! *click*
Bombella
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12 posted 2003-04-16 01:59 AM



Oh this is just brilliant. Every word cut into me. This truly is unreal. I loved it!!
Cherie..

passing shadows
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13 posted 2003-04-23 02:14 PM



QjQ
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14 posted 2003-04-23 04:06 PM


  Echoing hills and trembling waters
       soaring eagles and squirmming otters

theese lines impressed me well

Brad Majors
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15 posted 2003-04-23 06:13 PM


good piece
aaron woodside
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16 posted 2003-04-24 04:39 PM


I vote.  I liked it.

ex animo,
Aaron

IN NOMINE PATRI ET FILII ET SPIRITUS SANCTI

passing shadows
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17 posted 2003-04-26 12:11 PM



Poet4Christ
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18 posted 2003-04-26 12:37 PM


Amen to Love.  I truely enjoy a great poem full of positive energy.  Thank you and God bless you. oh, and I voted.

Thanx - Tim

Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
19 posted 2003-04-26 12:51 PM


A loving poem from a loving heart, I enjoyed your work here, life is too short not to love, but many things make this world go round.

Sincerely
RIck

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