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mpt
Junior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 32
australia

0 posted 2003-03-27 10:49 AM

reflections
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hopes for the future,
regrets of the past,
both dangerous things,
damaging my fragile heart.

i look for release,
somewhere to flee,
but everywhere i turn,
i see a reflection of me.

i dont like wat i c,
but ill work on the mirror,
reflect on the past,
and let my future get nearer.

Though dreams can be deceiving
Like faces are to hearts
They serve for sweet relieving
When fantasy and reality lie too far apart
- Fiona Apple

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2003-03-27 02:56 PM

nice reflective poetry, forwards and reverse imagery

Flower
Member

since 2003-03-15

Posts 240
California

2 posted 2003-03-27 03:31 PM

Interesting piece of writing.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-03-27 08:27 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Matt, this is heartfelt, sweet friend, there is no shame in looking to the future as long as you also immerse yourself in the present up to your dreams! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send special angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Matt, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-03-27 08:31 PM

A very interesting poem. Also an
excellent title for the book.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

5 posted 2003-04-05 11:10 AM

really enjoyed this

different and interesting piece
of writing, esp that last stanza!
it was awesome.
take care.
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

6 posted 2003-04-05 06:26 PM

nice reflections, getting my vote for sure

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

7 posted 2003-04-05 08:21 PM

Gets my vote. Joyce

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

8 posted 2003-04-05 10:19 PM

what a pretty ditty

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2003-04-07 02:42 AM

I like this reflection.
Hugs,
Ethel

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

10 posted 2003-04-07 08:57 PM

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