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Mandie
New Member

since 2003-03-20

Posts 7
Oregon, USA

0 posted 2003-03-27 12:58 PM

      These words that I speak come from the most distant, deepest and darkest places of my thoughts
      Alone I crawl through this dense maze of
         complications and problems
   All the while I reach for the answer but so     efforlessly all I find is another question
      Somewhere far away a voice will never be heard that deserves a change for an audition for
              a life of it's own
   Over the rainbow and through the vivid colors that strike me with a silence of beauty I know
                theres hope
   This world has made too many promises and now can't be trusted with the simplest whisper
        I'm walking in a circle as I draw a blank
             to the sitituation at hand
    Secrets may never be told and promises never broken till the sun rises from the south
    this world has a mind of it's own , so watch your back or the hands of jealousy and greed may
              take you away forever.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-03-27 02:24 AM

(sad sigh) Jealousy and greed are things that can truly afflict anyone, I know cause I've been there too! (big hugggssssssss) This is a well-said and powerful debut, sweet friend, may we all never back down! Welcome to Passions, sweet Mandie, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, we all love you so much, and please check your E-mail for a very special greeting from all of us here at Passions just for you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mandie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

2 posted 2003-03-27 04:54 AM

An extremely well done write for your initial post. I am definately looking forward to experiencing more.

Imagine all the People living life in peace...
John Lennon

[This message has been edited by Ringo (03-27-2003 04:55 AM).]

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

3 posted 2003-03-27 08:26 AM

Very fine first write.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-03-27 09:30 AM

Welcome to Passions, Mandie!
I enjoyed reading your "deepest thoughts"!

Warm, welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

5 posted 2003-03-27 09:51 AM

Wow Mandie,

I really enjoyed this poem. Jealousy is indeed a monster that too many partake in.

Dawn

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

6 posted 2003-03-27 12:43 PM

Love this mess.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2003-03-27 02:59 PM

Welcome to Passions!
Enjoyed your first post!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

8 posted 2003-03-27 03:09 PM

This world has made too many promises and now can't be trusted with the simplest whisper
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wow..I love that line and all it emcompasses!! very cool!!
Welcome to Poetry Land Mandie ...
so nice to have you here with us.

"and when we get to the pearly gates ...
we'll find what we called our sins were just mistakes."

Tom Kimmel

leighsa
Member

since 2003-02-27

Posts 74
Oregon, United States Of America

9 posted 2003-03-28 02:38 PM

Very lovly amanda, I cant wait to hear more from you ... I really hope that you get poems published in this passions... You have such a great heart and you can write very well...

Ashgiel

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

10 posted 2003-03-28 04:10 PM

I think we all experience that...great job and look forward to reading more of your problem-solving poems (and all the other ones) in the future!!!

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

[This message has been edited by KristieSue (03-28-2003 04:10 PM).]

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

11 posted 2003-03-29 12:45 PM

Welcome to Passions, Mandie! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?...

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