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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
I had to resubmit this because it is one of my favorites. I couldn't help think of EA's comment to Loner about going around with her eyes closed  Another Chance If love would come and unfold itself just one more time The stars in the night would twinkle and my hollow heart would find a pulse If love would open up its door and give a second chance then howling wolves who guard the night would turn their yearnings to song and in the center of the midnight moon sing a chorus of found refrain If love would again open up my eyes Then all I need see would be the truth of simple beauty and in that truth unconditional acceptance of love's forgiveness If just one more time love chanced to me c2002simplygold |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Electra, I am so happy you re-posted this, sweet friend, doesn't Earth Angel just write the most gorgeous comments just like you do? (kiss on cheek) There is always time for a second chance and if you believe in it it is bound to come true, yay, God Bless You, this has my happy vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Electra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...and my hollow heart would find a pulse... WOW! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very beautiful. I'm glad you submitted it for the book, SG. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Enjoyed this so very much. Voting. Maree  |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is lovely. Joyce [This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (03-16-2003 12:45 AM).] |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
My vote's in - I liked. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
So much truth in this, if love would only see reality sometimes many things would open up. Maree, I loved this poem and very glad you decided to submit it.  R.E.S.P.E.C.T. Aretha Franklin [This message has been edited by Mysteria (03-16-2003 04:28 AM).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
If only love could find us all...lovely poem! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OH WOW!!! YES!! Gets my vote! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I certainly can see why this would be one of your personal favorites! I was surprised when I saw your comment re my comment to Julie's poem! I wish you luck with this one! It deserves to be in the book! Warm Irish hugs, EA |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice, Electra... Another chance would be a wondrous thing indeed...  |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Noah, Thank you. You are such an angel and your work such joy! SG |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Sunshine, You are very kind. Thank you. SG |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Joyce, Spirit, Mysteria, Poet DeVine, Enchantress, Earth Angel, and Nan. Thank you all so much. You have no idea what it means to me to be accepted by each of you at Piptalk. Each of you write with such poise and expression. I am always eager to read and read and read. Wish I could be here all the time just taking in your words of wisdom and experience. May you all continue to write and stay within reach of my eyes.  SG |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
If love would open up its door and give a second chance then howling wolves who guard the night would turn their yearnings to song and in the center of the midnight moon sing a chorus of found refrain ============================= LOVE the imagery in this!! wonderful write of heart spirit and hope. lovely SG!! "and when we get to the pearly gates ... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes... beautifully done.. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SimplyGold - you words are simply gold... BC |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
the truth of simple beauty and in that truth unconditional acceptance of love's forgiveness If just one more time love chanced to me wouldn't that be wonderful..if only ~A~ [This message has been edited by Alicethruglass (03-29-2003 04:39 PM).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Nice writing. If only it would happen the way you wrote it. Sandra |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Janet, Capt Hair, Bill, Alice, Catalina To each of you "thank you". Wistful longing and no going back. It's tough isn't it? Thanks for stopping in. I couldn't ask for better company. SG |
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