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Life's Journey |
Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
Life’s Journey Distant geography Different topography And yet… The same highs and lows One minute laughter The next one disaster What follows there after? Nobody knows For every peak reached There’s a valley below For each distance traveled There’s still more to go Whenever we think that The end has been reached Another path opens… Another wall breached So it begins… And so shall it end… The high ground is often To hard to defend Each valley traversed Each river crossed Leads to a point Where all is not lost Life is a journey With death but one end Have you learned your lesson? Keep traveling, my friend… [This message has been edited by Tammy Blessing (03-17-2003 01:08 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely penned.....vote is in! ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Truly lovely poetry. Joyce |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very beautiful... "Love makes the world go around" |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
I will keep traveling... You've got my vote! “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Well said indeed. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Hi Tammy, I'm so glad you came back and checked the book submission box, cause now I can vote for this gem. |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
Thanks to all for your kind replies (and your votes!) Journey on my friends. Tammy |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Really liked this one, Tammy. You have my vote too! All writing comes |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Yes, there certainly are many lessons to learn in one's life's journey. A poem rich in meaning--and wisdom... Love & Light, Linda |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Tammy - I've traveled for a long time and perhaps have slowed down some, I hope. I voted for this poem, it does have a lot to say... BC |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Hello Tammy. The journey is worth nothing if we don't learn from it. Well penned. When you think you have heard it all, listen more closely. ~Dorene [This message has been edited by Chanson (03-19-2003 11:46 PM).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much, Tammy... especially the end. *S* Here's to lessons learned and good journeys. *S* |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
Life can be a series of failures or lessons and triumphs...it's all in what you make of it. Great job in portraying life! KS Why do I feel like I'm stalking suthern? LOL |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Wow! I loved this poem. Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent. |
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