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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea 
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If stars could weep, they would shower tears of sparkling fire to rain upon the earth and steal the night. No more does eve contain the satin solitude of peace, just empty moments filled with darkness, crippled thoughts, a purgatory until the day is born. Wrapped in ghostly cloak of singing crickets and Mockingbird songs, I stroll within the damp stillness in search of solace. Heavy is the scent of wetted earth and flowered branch. Spring has torn the world from winter's icy crypt. On the horizon are scarlet fingertips, timidly touching, like a virgin but with more experience and courage, pushing back the night. I throw off the cloak and breathe in the coming dawn. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Michael, this is sooooooo very heartfelt, sweet friend, yes, embrace that dawn, for hearts can break, some stars can explode when they become supernovas, and shades of gray can tinge a world, but know that the light never sleeps and shall restore amends! (big hugggsssssss) My vote is back up there for you, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So very beautiful Michael!! ~A hugs and a vote~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MichaelAuguste~ This is truly a lovely, lovely piece~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
So gentle - your writing. Have to vote on this for sure. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Again, I vote for your beautiful work, Michael. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Enjoyed the read  Charisma |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
luv you hon.....  Lauren~ Here I am |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Michael this is beautiful. I could see the images you wrote in this poem!  |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
You got my vote again Michael!  Elizabeth It's not having what you want, it's wanting what you've got... |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh, my goodness! This is fantastic, I love the imagery and the language. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
On the horizon are scarlet fingertips, timidly touching, like a virgin but with more experience and courage, pushing back the night. I throw off the cloak and breathe in the coming dawn. Oh this is truly wonderful. Enjoyed!  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Very much like your art Michael, perfection! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
such a beauitful poem, voting again! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is quite lovely.....  Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Andre Brink |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You make it seem worth staying up all night for! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Michael, This is a very beautiful piece. If only stars could take on human expressions once in a while, what all we could gleam from them. Dawn |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is beauty Michael.. and the imagery? outstanding! Definately a piece for the book. Maree |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
imagery........very nice. Jason |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Thanks to each of you. Your comments brought me a big smile. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Abolutely wonderful. Greatly job. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Michael, Very beautiful with wonderful imagery. Enjoyed greatly, Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
your words always touch...the artist in you always comes through. ~A~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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MovesInSilence Member
since 2004-03-21
Posts 111Perth, Australia |
so beautiful michael...*sigh* |
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