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"Foreword To Death" By Abortion
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"Foreword To Death" By Abortion |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA 
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"FOREWORD TO DEATH" BY ABORTION This child was to be the most beautiful thing That the world was to ever see So many plans were in store for this life A cure for aids, a helping hand Listening ears for a life unable to turn around But that's all in the past now That is all left behind Why was this life created? It was long before its time Just one quick ride across the town As the day became night A night of fun, just a one night stand Wouldn't see each other again... No repercussions of this night gone wrong That all changed that day she cried She found out that she holds the future To a life that is not her own That never should have happened Never heard from the lover Figured he'd left as soon as he heard the news Who would have thought at just sixteen She would have to make a decision On something that she would never even dream So take that cure for aids Another helping hand Ears to listen to a life going down the drain Thrown on the ground Like a lit cigar Stomped on, sent into oblivion Never to be found Only left to regret And not able to be redone - Cody - |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
I liked the way you put this...showed much thought. unfortunately, our nation will never realize the damage its done in abortion... KS |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Touching subject as well as 'touchey' Many years ago, my sister, then a nurse, working in emergency had a girl in who had tried to abort herself with a coat-hanger, she died. If abortion had been an option back then maybe she would still be alive today, with children and grandchildren. Sad state of affairs either way. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Considering this is a more Open forum and abortion is such a sensitive issue, I won't express my whole opinion, but what I can say is this is an excellent write that must be read by everyone in awareness of this serious issue and I most graciously offer you my vote! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, my prayers are with all the patients who face this decision, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I think you took an issue that needs more awareness and presented it in a perfect light, well done indeed. |
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Tristan Junior Member
since 2003-03-12
Posts 29 |
no one seems to know just what they have to go through until it's too late. Then theres all the post tramatic stress and emotional attachments are shattered. |
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wvplayernotreally Member
since 2002-11-06
Posts 215yakima wa |
good job! and it didn't make me cry! woohoo. knowing people who have done this though hurts never knowing what their life had in store. good job. " I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking." |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
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BlueEyes Member
since 2002-08-30
Posts 152TX, USA |
thank you for sharing... I, too, shall cast my vote... BlueEyes |
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AJMGW Member
since 2002-11-19
Posts 57Galaxy Roller Rink |
I had to come and vote! awesome job! AJMGW |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
It gets my vote too. It's an awesome write. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A painful subject all the way around. Moving write... Peace & Light, Earth Angel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, it's a very painful subject, but one that needs to be addressed and dealt with. You have my vote, because this is an excellent write.  |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
This poem has a message that needs to be heard, great job writing it here. Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
... ~touching ... When you think you have heard it all, |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Cody - this one killed me - killed me - amazing writing - but maybe that poor 16 yr old had no other choice - you know? Sometimes God has different plans for us all xxoo |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
A very touchy subject, but certainly one that needs to spoken of more often. This gets my vote. Very good writing, by the way. |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
I too had an "unwanted" pregnancy. I am glad I saw it through. My son is now 12 soon to be a teenager, and he is the light of my life. This world would indeed be a much darker place without his presence in it.You'll never know what you're giving up when you give up on life.... any life. Love, Light and Peace, Sherry Gardner Cherish the good memories of the past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
A tough subject..Youre perspective on this one was well thought out, a well presented... enjoyed the read hugs, g "laughter is the shortest distance between two people" - victor borge |
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