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Even Love Dies |
Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Even Love Dies Even love dies, he sadly said to me And he bowed his head in misery No I said that’s where you’re wrong Love is eternal it’s hope’s own song The sun can die, the earth fall to dust All that you know might turn to rust The universe may reel and then fall away But love lives on forever and a day All truth is dead he uttered softly And then he mumbled again, I’m sorry No, I said you’re wrong yet again Truth shines it clears away pain You’ve lost your hope that’s all I said Despair no more for truth can’t be dead If it wasn’t for truth where would we be Trapped in a place of insanity I can’t have hope he sighed at last And then he said not with my past No, listen you don’t understand Love bring forgiveness in its hand Hope for a future look up and smile There in pure love rest for awhile Hear me love will always rise anew And hope and truth will always find you Don’t fear that love dies, it never will And hope and truth will your dreams fulfil Marsha Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds but I can face the future with courage brave and bold Footprints In My Heart Kethry [This message has been edited by Sunshine (03-17-2003 08:47 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Marsha, you are right, love NEVER dies, sometimes it may come undone and be tarnished, but love heals and love consoles and love hopes and understands all things and will make its course once more if a heart is broken! (big hugggssssss) I am happy you got this back up so I can vote again, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Marsha, this is true... real love never dies... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And it's a good thing you did... thank you, my dear girl... If I whisper, will you listen?... |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
*nodding my head*...Absolutely! *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
For sure!! Into the book with you! ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Essorant Member Elite
since 2002-08-10
Posts 4769Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada |
A pleasure to read your poem again. Lovely penned. Essorant. [This message has been edited by Essorant (03-12-2003 05:07 PM).] |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
I'm with you on this one Marsha. Love and truth will always find their way. Elizabeth It's not having what you want, it's wanting what you've got... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Revisiting is a good thing... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha My dear this is definitely book material. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This gets more beautiful with every read... but if my vote's lost again, I'm gonna play kick the can with the ballot box!!! LOL |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Well, it makes me sniff a bit, but I guess you don't mind. We all know I'm hard as nails til you get to me. Sigh. It's quite lovely, actually, but you didn't hear that from me. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
mum again it was lovely and sad. Very well written love and warm stuff as always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaLove~ You are truly a poetess with expression-ink from the heart~ You can book it ! Krissy~ Hi gal~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Love that lives forever...an eternal theme. You've expressed it so eloquently, Marsha. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Not voting for this lovely piece would be 'sin' indeed. Beautiful write. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful penned as always Marsha Charisma |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Voting again, not because I can, for suthern already kicked it, which is better than kicking the bucket - but because I want to. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Marsha, this is lovely, and so very true. Nicely done. |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
I don't remember what I replied the last time, but always I am impressed by the depth of your love. hugssssss M |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You know in your heart what real love is - so much more than others will dream of. Nicely dedicated Marsha. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Where the heck is Bev when she's needed? *G* Beautiful words from a beautiful heart. *S* |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
voting once more! |
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waldopepper Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 157Tennessee, USA |
Absolutely brimming with reasons to believe! Your devotion to the inherent goodness of pure love soars throughout the lines. Wonderful. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Getting my vote again sweet lady Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Time for new eyes... |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is lovely and wonderfully wise. Joyce It doesn't let me vote. |
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pjtalty Member
since 2002-07-17
Posts 111W.A., Australia |
I enjoyed reading aloud this elegant and attractively structured poem about the eternal nature of truth, love and hope. It has a seductive, flowing rhythm and a melodic feel that are compatible with the theme. It certainly deserves to take its place in the anthology. Patrick Talty [This message has been edited by pjtalty (04-29-2003 08:02 AM).] |
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