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Faith |
rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Faith A Young Girl’s life Shattered into A million pieces Her innocence taken Forcing her to grow up Way faster than she should Missing the small childhood joys Every child has a given right to have And now as she struggles to find all the Many different small pieces of her broken life Trying to repair the damage done, one piece at a time She stands with her head up high, knowing she will be ok Having undying faith in the strong love that surrounds her being And the peace and happiness she knows she will find, one day at a time.
"wake me up inside call my name and save me from the dark" -Bring Me To Life by Evanescence [This message has been edited by Sunshine (03-26-2003 10:35 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
YES Tara! Yes!!! Into the book with this keeper! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Well this is just amazing. The formatting is really superb. Really, incredible! |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
This is awesome, I love the complete package. Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Vote deserving for sure. Beautifully presented. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay! Oh Tara, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I have been there too, believe me, and though I am saddened I never got to live a decent childhood memory, I am stronger than ever and will embrace the sun with the spirit of the boy in me so keep letting the spirit of the girl in you sing! (kiss on cheek) You have my innocent vote, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
rosepetals ~ ..."Faith" can build a mountain--and you just did!... Peace & Love, Earth Angel |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I think you are heading to happiness.... lovely this....hugssss you Lauren~ I close my eyes and there in the shadows I see your light |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
One piece at a time, one step at a time... we reach our objectives. Well writ. *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
A great spirit showing through. Joyce |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
I too enjoyed this entire presentation. Dawn |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
how beautiful done, poem aswell the presentation.....enjoyed both Charisma |
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sweetwater Member
since 2002-12-16
Posts 178Perth |
"I too enjoyed this entire presentation" ditto |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A beautiful layout...a must for the book! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Very nice...... Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful words presented beautifully. *S* |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Thank you all for stopping and reading. This has always been one of my favorite of mine.. I think because it is so personal. Anyway.. thanks Tara "in my field of paper flowers |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
yes...one day at a time... one poem at a time. touching words...creative presentation. Well done poetess Tara "and when we get to the pearly gates ... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Very nicely done, Tara...both in verse and in presentation. "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
rosepetals25 - I know that you have worked a while presenting and writing this to post. It deserves a vote... BC |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Tara, Wonderful my Dear, I loved the presentation you have here and the climax of wisdom that seems to grow with every line, so enjoyed. Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Tara, this is beautiful, the poem and the presentation. Thank you for sharing this personal and heart-felt poem. Hugs, Ethel |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
now this. . . I like. . . excellent form and presentation. . . hey, say HI to Dave for me will you?? ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
one day at a time. i related to these words greatly...sometimes, it is the small steps that help us move on... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful done!! Charisma |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Tara, beautiful writing from your pen as usual. I'm sorry Ive been out of touch hon. life is so crazy for me these days. hope you're doing well in texas. i'll write you as soon as i can. again beautiful poem! take care. amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Such a heartfelt piece, presented beautifully ~ Bonnie |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Certainly getting my vote Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Bump... |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well expressed and presented! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
I loved this piece so much, i had to bump it up! great write tara. take care. amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Thank you everyone for your nice words.. I'm flattered that you all stopped to read my poem. I'm sorry I didn't respond sooner..but my puter is being rebuilt..and of course.. it is being a pain. But thank you all the same Tara "in my field of paper flowers |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
BUMP! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
with faith all things are possable |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
The title pretty much wraps it up! Excellent presentation .... and Hugs to you! ~Sheri |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Very powerful words, Tara. I liked the strength you portrayed in this. ~Liz Waited on a line of greens and blues, just to be the next to be with you.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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