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Candlelight Of The Moon |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“CANDLELIGHT OF THE MOON” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Lights flicker in the darkness of night, your being glistens with its passion, a tender hand touched, taken into mine, two hearts beat slowly in perfect unison… Rain showers fall, as they touch upon you, hair flows down like silk in ringlets, wetness touches your face with caresses, moonbeams dance in harmony with droplets… Flickers are the candlelight of the moon, as you sparkle with them in tender dance, your eyes are the pathways to your soul, this I see within you, with just one glance… ~~~~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
awwwww Bill....I just love the way you write......beautiful as always Charisma |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Very romantic, as is fitting for anything with both the moon and candlelight in the title. J There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
A soft, magical image Bill! |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
How wonderfully romantic...sigh...and how blessed this lady of yours..beautiful poetry. Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Bill, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, this made me smile as I wish for you to always look through loves eyes and find that golden door of her heart always! (big hugggsssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, yay, you have my lustrous vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Soft and magical, words bathed in moonlight. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
If ever I were to get into another romantic relationship, not only would I like him to have the soul of a poet, I would like him to BE a poet! Warm hugs, EA |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
THe king of romantic poetry does it again. Very tenderly written |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So beautiful...so romantic... Just like you Bill. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
You are the romantic. This must go in the book. Joyce |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very romantic, Bill! Lovely! |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
"Flickers are the candlelight of the moon, as you sparkle with them in tender dance, your eyes are the pathways to your soul, this I see within you, with just one glance…" My goodness.. how romantic and lovely! You have my vote! Oh, make me Thine forever |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
BC...there you go, pouring on the romance again. This one flickers of love [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (02-23-2003 10:05 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, a very beautiful poem and a very beautiful book submission.. "Love makes the world go around" |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Bill~ These things that you see are through the eyes of a true romantic. Just beautiful. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
This is too good -- we gots to put it in a book.... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
We surely need some BCI romance in this book, don't we?... |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Beautiful. Dawn |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
beautiful! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Bill, this is another one of your romantic beauties ... regards, sudhir |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BillCharles~ Well .... you had to know I'd find this 'moon'~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Bill, I enjoy your romantic muse. *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Well you'd have to be in a coma not to *sigh* when you read this. Your romantic poetry touches the heart Bill. In the midst of *sigh* you got my vote |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Bill You are write - the eyes are a pathway to the soul. Sparkling eyes and the moonlight make a very romantic setting. Voted! [This message has been edited by Ariana (02-27-2003 08:43 AM).] |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
How wonderfully romantic....I enjoyed!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Andre Brink |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill, Good one, glad you put this one in. |
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jbouder Member Elite
since 1999-09-18
Posts 2534Whole Sort Of Genl Mish Mash |
I bet she really liked this one, Bill. I did too. Thanks for the read. Jim |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
" ...Flickers are the candlelight of the moon, as you sparkle with them in tender dance,..." Wonderful words, romantic thought. Hugs, Marti Dwelling on the negative simply |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Very well done, enjoyed...vote Dennis [This message has been edited by dhicks03 (02-28-2003 12:58 AM).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I have to say that this is one of the best that has come from your romantic heart...very soft, and tender, very beautiful, and it belongs in our new book!! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen! ~~S~~ |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Would love to see a sequel to this, Bill. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Lovely as always Bill *s M |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well Bill must be that mountain air that gives you all these romantic thoughts, and a lady up north is a lucky gal Nice write. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a wonderfully romantic picture you've written. *S* I like this very much! *S* |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Bill, You make me smile You make me dream You give me back the taste of love Your writing touches me! SimplyGold |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Hey Bill - congrats - you deserve this much xxoo |
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