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dhicks03
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0 posted 2003-02-23 01:25 AM



Forgone conclusions
present
Love,
heaven sent,
departed


Was that sorry on my breath?
Somehow,
You knew I couldn't stay


Love
Yes love
Taste bitter when it's gone


Pieces of me
Scattered about
Swept away
In silver lined reflections


Yes Sunshine
It was so very special
So very true
Hold on, hold on
Staring at the wall...I'm almost...gone


© 2002 Dennis Hicks

© Copyright 2003 Dennis Hicks - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2003-02-23 01:29 AM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Dennis, this is so sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope now a new love has touched your heart that tastes as sweet as sugar! (sigh) I send angel hugs and my vote your way, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dennis, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ellie LeJeune
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2 posted 2003-02-23 08:05 AM


I know of which you write...and you've written it so profoundly from the heart...I love your style...Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Chanson
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3 posted 2003-02-23 08:22 AM


I like the
combination of
seriousness and
whimsy. *s

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-02-23 10:10 AM


Our Sunshine certainly does get around, doesn't she? tehe

Moving little write with lots of emotion--up, down and all around!

Warm morning hugs,
Earth Angel

dgvarner
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5 posted 2003-02-23 10:12 AM


Love does, indeed, taste bitter when it's gone...

nicely written..

hugs, g

"laughter is the shortest distance between two people"  - victor borge

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6 posted 2003-02-23 12:12 PM


Dennis, though sad, this is beautiful....book? Yes...

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel GG~  
                  

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-23-2003 12:13 PM).]

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with you
7 posted 2003-02-23 04:21 PM


I think I love everything you write....
Enchantress
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8 posted 2003-02-23 04:28 PM


This...is exquistie!!

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Sudhir Iyer
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9 posted 2003-02-23 04:31 PM


liked this one a lot...

regards,
sudhir

Titia Geertman
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10 posted 2003-02-23 06:14 PM



WOW you got my vote for sure, lovely poem

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Nan
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11 posted 2003-02-25 08:24 AM


Well written, yet bittersweet...
SPIRIT
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12 posted 2003-03-17 04:38 PM


Lovely. Voted.
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13 posted 2003-03-17 04:43 PM


Pieces of me
Scattered about
Swept away
In silver lined reflections''


I found this so powerful....I have felt this too many times....only to notice the reflection....NICE!!


~~~~~~~~~
Lauren~


I close my eyes and there in the shadows I see your light
You come to me out of my dreams
Across the night

Earth Angel
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14 posted 2003-03-17 04:43 PM


Glad to see that this was written in 2002 and that you're still around! That was full of sadness and desolation! A real heart-tugger.

Warm Irish hugs,
Earth Angel

dhicks03
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15 posted 2003-03-17 04:57 PM


Thank you kind people for your warm words. I appreciate them immensly!

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16 posted 2003-03-27 02:46 AM



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17 posted 2003-04-08 02:38 PM


I like your formatting of this and also the bittersweetness of the poem, and sorry I missed it.

     
To be hugged by a friend is wealth beyond words.

Mon Cherie
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18 posted 2003-05-03 11:49 AM


This is so bittersweet... Love found, yet parted soon... Thanks for sharing..

_,,,^.^,,,_
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displaced
19 posted 2003-05-10 05:56 AM



Charisma
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20 posted 2003-05-11 08:22 PM


Lovely!

Charisma

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