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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Forgone conclusions present Love, heaven sent, departed Was that sorry on my breath? Somehow, You knew I couldn't stay Love Yes love Taste bitter when it's gone Pieces of me Scattered about Swept away In silver lined reflections Yes Sunshine It was so very special So very true Hold on, hold on Staring at the wall...I'm almost...gone © 2002 Dennis Hicks |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Dennis, this is so sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope now a new love has touched your heart that tastes as sweet as sugar! (sigh) I send angel hugs and my vote your way, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dennis, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
I know of which you write...and you've written it so profoundly from the heart...I love your style...Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
I like the combination of seriousness and whimsy. *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Our Sunshine certainly does get around, doesn't she? tehe Moving little write with lots of emotion--up, down and all around! Warm morning hugs, Earth Angel |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
Love does, indeed, taste bitter when it's gone... nicely written.. hugs, g "laughter is the shortest distance between two people" - victor borge |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dennis, though sad, this is beautiful....book? Yes...  "Love makes the world go around" ~with love and hugs from Ethel GG~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-23-2003 12:13 PM).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I think I love everything you write....  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This...is exquistie!! ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
liked this one a lot... regards, sudhir |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
WOW you got my vote for sure, lovely poem Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Well written, yet bittersweet... |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Lovely. Voted. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Pieces of me Scattered about Swept away In silver lined reflections'' I found this so powerful....I have felt this too many times....only to notice the reflection....NICE!! ~~~~~~~~~ Lauren~ I close my eyes and there in the shadows I see your light |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Glad to see that this was written in 2002 and that you're still around! That was full of sadness and desolation! A real heart-tugger. Warm Irish hugs, Earth Angel |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Thank you kind people for your warm words. I appreciate them immensly! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I like your formatting of this and also the bittersweetness of the poem, and sorry I missed it. |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
This is so bittersweet... Love found, yet parted soon... Thanks for sharing.. _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Lovely! Charisma |
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