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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Fallen Leaves Dead to the ground A stitch of time Taken from mine As I look beyond Sweet tears touch Dawn light lay across As nature awakes Near snow topped peaks I say my prayer For you I keep "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown [This message has been edited by Justbleu (04-10-2003 09:29 PM).] |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Lovely words to be included in our book. Joyce |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Very nice penned. Charisma |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You know this almost rang like "Now I Lay Me Down To Sleep" and it was such a lovely prayer as well. I really look forward to your poetry and this is another reason why. Don't be too hard on yourself, even Einstein |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
There are some who will always remain. (Amen) I woke up this morning with thoughts of dawn and the promise of a new day as well, so you certainly caught me in the perfect mood to especially vote for this poem. Good job. -Bob |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bridgette~ So gentle ... so lovely ... so you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A crystal tear always catches my attention... this is lovely, Bridgett! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
such a lovely beautiful poem! this was truly full of such wonderful imagery! take care. amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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ShadowLost Junior Member
since 2001-06-23
Posts 43 |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Nicely done...here's my vote. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Justbleu - snow covered mountains high, right here they are in front of my eyes, beautiful the are, as this poem... My vote... Bc |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Other than the font color, which made it very difficult to read, I loved your words. Hugs for peace, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Happily I cast my vote for this. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I wish this smile to always fill your heart and may the leaves shine emerald green with the dawns sunlight gleaming with it! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful hart, sweet Bridgette, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
A beautifully tender write Bridgette ~ Bonnie |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very soft and soothing, Bridgette. Lovely! I had a bit of trouble reading the green font though. Perhaps it is my screen...or maybe my eyes! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bridgette...this is so beautiful! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Passionate friends Thank You sooo much for your thoughtful comments!!!! They mean a lot to me!!! This place is soo much fun!!! LOVE AND HUGS, Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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waldopepper Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 157Tennessee, USA |
Lovely job Bridgette. I really like how you played with the hint of another familiar rhyming phrase in this piece. The images are beautifully expressed. Again at the end it subtly reminds of the "lay me down to sleep" rhyme. Quite witty of you my friend. And by the way, I certainly do appreciate the "bumps". You are too kind. Anyway, you've got my vote with this creatively crafted write. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is beautiful, Bridgette. Here's my vote for the book...*click* Hugs, Ethel |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
A beauty....for the book |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Hi Justbleu, enyoyed the poem. mysticpoe |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Much easier to read now, Bridgette! Thanks! |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
This is a very lovely write. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
I enjoyed this very much!! Hugs for Peace, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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Poet4Christ Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 211Oklahoma City |
A vote and a bump for an incrredible poem.. God bless you for your words.. Thanx - Tim He that trusteth in his own heart is a fool: but whoso walketh wisely, he shall be delivered. Proverbs 28:26 |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Thanks for the bump, Tim,...don't know how I missed this one! Spectacular writing, Bridgette! |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
in the high and lonely places we seek that which is lost arthur |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Where life is measured against nature I am always sure to be found and I am so happy I found this one. Wonderfully illustrated in your words and a welcome treat on this day for my eyes and mind. |
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ShadowLost Junior Member
since 2001-06-23
Posts 43 |
I'm just stopping by to give this a bump. ...and now these three things remain: faith, hope and love. But, the greatest of these is love. 1 Corinthians 13.13 |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A lovely prayer indeed... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow, this is so warm and comforting...*click* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Outstanding...James |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
BUMP |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Such delicate words... Thank you for sharing such a lovely prayer with us all here... Cheers! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
you have such a way with words |
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ShadowLost Junior Member
since 2001-06-23
Posts 43 |
BUMP |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
What would I do without friends like you.....HUGS and happy thoughts to you all!!! Thank You sooo much!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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ShadowLost Junior Member
since 2001-06-23
Posts 43 |
Here for a quick bump to the top. ...and now these three things remain: faith, hope and love. But, the greatest of these is love. 1 Corinthians 13.13 |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nicely written and a lovely write "one needs not challenge all the players to win the game" |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
nice and simply put... very impressive, well done "more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you" |
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ShadowLost Junior Member
since 2001-06-23
Posts 43 |
BUMP |
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Lynda Member
since 2003-04-26
Posts 52Vic, Australia |
Thanks for the nice thoughts. Enjoyed! Astronomy, an interest here? An idea there perchance? Lynda |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
This certainly gets my vote!! I note you're in Oregon; you must wake to sun on the same snow-capped peaks that I do. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Justbleu, Very nice! SG |
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