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Munda
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The Hague, The Netherlands

0 posted 2003-02-21 06:20 PM

In Amsterdam a lady sat behind a window pane.
When passers-by looked in they saw a site they'd not forget.
She had three legs, but one was not for walking on at all.
When asked if I would come inside, I said, "You surely jest.

I know it seems a little strange I walk around these streets.
A Red Light District's something we don't have back home you see,
And after all the stories told by family and friends,
I felt the need to acquiesce to curiosity.

But may I ask you madam at the risk of being blunt,
About the artificial leg that's hanging on your wall?"
"Well surely lad," she said, "'twould be my pleasure to reveal
The mystery behind this decoration to you all.

As you well know most people do not think much of us whores.
They seems to think we're dangerous, much worse than a disease;
But what if no one would fulfill the sexual needs of men?
How many women out there would be seen as sex trophies?

For often time is paid for just to have a listening ear,
A reassuring smile, or simply not to be alone.
Of course we're also paid to make a fantasy come true;
No strings attached, no promises, the battle of hormones.

And how about the handicapped? They also have desires,
'Cause when they fall in love it mostly means platonically.
They pay me for a loving touch; some tenderness, a dream,
But most of all I help them to escape reality.

One day a client dropped by with a smile upon his face,
Presenting me a parcel large, inside a wooden leg."
He said; "I hope I don't offend you with this gift my dear,
Please give me a few minutes to explain to you I beg.

It's meant as token of appreciation by all men
With handicaps, who were at loss by world's coldest embrace.
Through you I've learned I'm still a man, inside I am complete,
Accept this wooden leg, I beg, as medal for your grace."

"I never had another gift that's meant so much to me,
And therefore it's upon my wall for everyone to see.
Now all I ask of you dear lad, returning overseas,
Please don't speak badly of us Sir, we're more than eyes can see."

Munda

[This message has been edited by Munda (02-21-2003 06:21 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

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1 posted 2003-02-21 06:39 PM

BRAVO!!! Oh Munda, this is wonderful, sweet friend, it can be so difficult for so many to live in the heart of the city, there are so many stories to tell and you sympathize so well with a story here! (big hugggsssssss) This is poignant and well-narrated, sweet friend, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Munda, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Duncan
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2 posted 2003-02-21 06:39 PM

Now that was a different kind of story. Interesting write.

the_loner_23
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3 posted 2003-02-21 11:45 PM

I really liked this a lot.

Cold hands means a warm heart

garysgirl

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4 posted 2003-02-21 11:58 PM

Munda, this is a very different poem, but it was very good. I love the way you wrote it.

Hugs,
Ethel

Mysteria

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5 posted 2003-02-22 02:17 AM

Absolutely fantastic Munda, and I applaud you for doing a poem at their defense. You are so right - things are not always what meets the eye indeed. Oh this has to get into the book, and you have my vote.

~* Carpe' Diem *~

Madame Chipmunk
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6 posted 2003-02-22 02:28 AM

Excellent job, Munda... you've got my vote!

Lyra

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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

7 posted 2003-02-22 06:18 AM

There are lessons to be found
in all walks of life...

all.

Thank you Munda...

Kit McCallum

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8 posted 2003-02-22 08:43 AM

You've captured a slice of life from a very unique vantage Munda, and wove the story with dignity and care. Well done.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

9 posted 2003-02-22 09:23 AM

Fantastic story here Munda.
Very well done!
~hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

SEA

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with you

10 posted 2003-02-22 10:09 AM

have you posted this one before? I could swear I've read this...

I like this very much...I never judge a book by it's cover, or a person, by what they do for a living...

[This message has been edited by SEA (02-22-2003 10:10 AM).]

Ratleader

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11 posted 2003-02-22 11:05 AM

Well told, Dutchie, well told!

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

12 posted 2003-02-22 11:44 AM

Well, now! You certainly spun a unique tale! Full of heart and soul ---and off the beaten path of life.

Warm morning hugs,
Earth Angel

Sudhir Iyer
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13 posted 2003-02-22 12:35 PM

very unique... very well said...

regards,
sudhir

aries_luv_ppl
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14 posted 2003-02-22 12:39 PM

this is unique, well done.

~Every girl has a dream within.

Balladeer

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15 posted 2003-02-22 08:18 PM

I know that girl! She charged me an arm AND a leg!!!

I love the way you write this, munda. It's a good story told in excellent rhyme with a very innovative topic of discussion. I applaud your originality

Martie

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16 posted 2003-02-22 08:34 PM

Munda--The moral in the story wonderfully told and enjoyed. Voting!

Dr.Moose1
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17 posted 2003-02-22 09:47 PM

Munda,
Thank you. You never cease to delight. My best to you.
Doc

Munda
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The Hague, The Netherlands

18 posted 2003-02-23 08:40 AM

Thanks everybody for your support and kind words.

Yes, Sea, this comes from Open#15.

ecrivan
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my own state

19 posted 2003-02-23 02:31 PM

well recounted Munda..more than the eyes can see, pleasure seeing the 'lesson' of discretion/understanding in between the lines
it has my vote!

Charisma

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lost in blue pages

20 posted 2003-02-23 02:42 PM

Oh yes I remember this one ......excellent write Munda.....as always

Charisma

Denise

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21 posted 2003-02-23 06:20 PM

Munda, there is so much more than ever meets the eye...true of all of us in one way or another. Great to see you again, Munda! You have been missed!

Nan

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22 posted 2003-02-24 01:35 PM

You know this is one of my favorites of yours...

Elizabeth Santos
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Pennsylvania

23 posted 2003-02-24 08:11 PM

Very original and captivating piece
I was entranced
(LOL, Balladeer)
For the book!
Liz

Jamie
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24 posted 2003-02-24 08:13 PM

Wonderful story-- well done

J

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

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25 posted 2003-02-24 08:41 PM

suthern

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26 posted 2003-02-25 03:31 PM

Wonderful story beautifully written. *S*

Ceinwyn
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27 posted 2003-02-26 11:03 AM

Should I stand in line and take a number..I too enjoyed..

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Dark Angel
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28 posted 2003-02-26 03:51 PM

A wonderful story indeed. enjoyed very much.

Janet Marie
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29 posted 2003-02-26 04:00 PM

whats that old saying...dont judge someone till youve walked in their shoes.....
well done poetess Munda...wisdom of verse and cadence.

Where the touch of lovers end and the soul of friends begin,
there's a need to be separate and a need to be one ...
it's struggle neither wins.

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

30 posted 2003-02-26 04:33 PM

Munda - beautifully told...

BC

Titia Geertman
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31 posted 2003-02-26 09:01 PM

Definitely getting my vote, loved it the first time

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow

32 posted 2003-03-04 05:27 AM

Munda, this poem is beautifully written, and it tells a fascinating story.

Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent.

Andrew Scott
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Redlands,CA,USA

33 posted 2003-03-06 01:12 PM

I've always been one to see the world in grays... you've taken what for many is a very black and white subject and blended to a perfect shade. I bow to you and yours with vote in hand. Peace m'lady.

DawnG

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34 posted 2003-03-06 10:27 PM

Munda,

I think this is my favorite poem of yours.

Dawn

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

35 posted 2003-03-14 05:43 PM

and here I thought Balladeer was the only one who could tell a story like this. Absolutely wonderful...true or not, it makes one think and feel.

hugsssss
M

WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon

36 posted 2003-03-15 11:09 AM

Definately one of the most original pieces I've read. Nicely done. It gets my vote for sure.

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