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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Your photograph still affords me a moment of delusion just long enough to fleetingly embrace the narcotic dream of us. You are beautiful… I am better on paper this time let’s leave me there. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, you're certainly good on paper here! I like your character portrayal here, Duncan,...and the humility  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan Well you threw a loop over me. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Duncan, this is very touching, sweet friend, may that pretty face from behind the photograph forever caress the depth of your heart and fill you with comfort and assurance! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, God Bless You, you certainly have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OMG!!! YES!! I love this! ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Your photograph still affords me a moment of delusion" ohh this does ache... [This message has been edited by SEA (02-20-2003 11:12 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This has got to be in the book. I love this. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I am better on paper ======================= I still recall the first time I read that line....it just went thru me. yeah... youre something else on paper... but then great poets are. "Trees are poems that the earth writes upon the sky ... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
wondered if you were ever going to get around to this... about time.  I've got to go look in the archives... I know there was one you wrote that made me totally envious..wishing I had written it. This one made me think of it... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
this is very well done... so easy to read... yet the meaning behind the words... wonderful "better on paper" ... fantastic... regards, sudhir |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Better... on or off paper... just better that you are finally here... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I get the feeling that you are better off the paper, than you think you are!---and that is saying something, because you are pretty darn good on it! Warm hugs, Linda |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
VERY NICE!!!!!! Bridgette |
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cupcake Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 116 |
Awesome! I'm a reader - not a writer. |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
Duncan! You made it! |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Really wonderful, simplistic and real. I like it. Jenn "Now I'm convinced that he's heaven sent, and must be out of his mind- mama he's crazy, crazy over me." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
This should be required reading. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Duncan, this is fantastic. So sad, though. I know the feeling. Sandra |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Duncan......Perhaps a poet is always envious of the person they are on paper..I wonder, and a great read! Voting! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How well I understand. *S* I think my words ARE me... but some read more there... and I fall short. Excellent!!! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I think you're better....period Definitely getting my vote Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Enjoyed!!  Charisma |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
It's about time my paper boy showed up! I needed my poetry fix for the night! LOL. I'm sorry that you are delusional.  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Duncan - yes you are good on paper, and with this write is my vote... BC |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Duncan, this said so much in so few words, and brother do I feel the same as this poem you sure have my vote for the truth and humility offered in this poem. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I LOVE this Dunc... long time no hug, either-- so...? |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Thank you to everyone for reading and responding. I do appreciate your time. Ron...I'm still waiting. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
awww...I am sure you are better in real then just on paper I enjoyed this view of you M |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
(Smiles) Notice that I don't include a picture!!! Some of us here I'm afraid are a lot less photogenic than we are poetigenic. I like this one. Short, simple and to the point.-Bob |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Duncan, this is sweeeeet! *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
sigh... this, to me, is a must... love your writing D  K |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Duncan, I thought for sure that I voted for this yesterday...  reckon I was wrong, so..*click* There it goes  Hugs Ethel |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Duncan, if this doesn't go in, i will throw a tantrum!!! it's going into my library. lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
I just love the first few lines, I can relate to them so well. *sigh* Beautiful, Beautiful poem. It has my vote as well. WinterWren |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
You are better on paper, but I like you even better without  thanks for your comment! Lyra |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh this HAS TO BE be in the book. Love it. Maree |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Duncan, You surprised me. A submission that is not your typical write. Well done, I like it. Gets my vote for sure. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Yep, so am I...but you have said it simply and with artistic flair! beautifully written! Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
I feel this one my friend..well written in such few words.. hugs, g "laughter is the shortest distance between two people" - victor borge |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellent expression, Duncan. Definitely has to go in the book! |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Not one syllable wasted. This is a fine write!! Ken J Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Duncan...I've only got one word for this poem YES!!!!! P.S. by the way, I liked it |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
...oops, I liked it so much I voted twice [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (02-23-2003 10:08 PM).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Love this, Duncan. So much said, in so few words. Wonderfully done. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
A great little poem -- gets my vote for sure. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I like it, Duncan.. yep...  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Back up to the top with you dear fellow...great write, can't vote twice, but I can get you back up to the top |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
WOWWWWWWW what a great poem... I really enjoyed the read PoetFriend Duncan... Smiles2u *~coco~* |
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