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The Legend of Jenny Lee......last one for the book |
Balladeer
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There have been many legends penned about the early West Lawmen and desperados, boom towns, ghost towns and the rest But one stands out above the rest within my memory... The hooker with the golden smile by name of Jenny Lee. The wild west was a very special era of our past There weren't too many luxuries and life was hard and fast. In Cottonwood, when days were long and over-filled with stress The wranglers could unwind at Mary's House of Happiness. Mary was a lady with a million-dollar smile Who ran her House of Happiness with dignity and style. A dozen ladies met the needs of all who had the fee And, best above the rest, the sweetheart known as Jenny Lee. Young Jenny was a pretty girl who had a certain flair Of making cowboys feel special when they entered there. She treated all with kindness and a sense of dignity And everyone for miles around all worshipped Jenny Lee. Piano music filled the house with joy on Friday nights As cowboys came to sample House of Happiness delights. A warm bath washed off trail dust and whiskey quenched the thirst As voices sang in unison old tunes of naughty verse. He came in on a Tuesday, late in June, as I recall That stranger out of nowhere that nobody knew at all. Five decades had carved wrinkles on a face made out of stone Belonging to the kind of man who always rides alone. He tied his horse at Mary’s, knocked politely on the door And Mary smiled they way she had a million times before. She offered him a drink and asked what might his pleasure be… He said he came to see the girl the boys called Jenny Lee. She sent a boy to fetch sweet Jenny, then walked to the door And led him upstairs to a bedroom on the second floor. He sat down on the bed and waited, quiet as could be And, in no time at all appeared the face of Jenny Lee. She said, “I’m honored, sir, that you would choose to seek me out. I’m sure you will be satisfied. Of that I have no doubt.” He rose and tossed a twenty dollar bill upon the shelf And said, “ There’s just one thing I want –to know about yourself.” This took her by surprise a bit but one thing she had learned One never knew the crazy pathways that a man’s mind turned And if he chose to pay for conversation, that’s ok She’d humor him and hour or so and then send him away. “My name is Jenny…I was born in Knoxville, Tennessee. As near as I can recollect, my age is twenty-three. I never knew my pa….ma said he was a travelin’ man. She did her best to raise me up according to God’s plan.” “Though we were poor, my momma always kept a happy mood. She hunted game and raised some corn and cabbages for food. She taught me how to read and write and do arithmetic And then when I was seventeen, poor mama came down sick. I wandered after momma died, just traveling around Until one day I wound up in this little, one-horse town. That’s when Mary saw me and gave me a place to stay And that’s the story of my life and why I’m here today” “Oh, I am not complaining, mister. Men like me a lot And give me temporarily the love I never got. I’m grateful for the life I have and I thank God above For finding me a special place that’s filled with so much love.” The old man got up slowly and, to Jenny Lee’s surprise, She saw a trail of lonely teardrops falling from his eyes. His face took on a saddened look – his shoulders slumped and fell And she could tell his soul was falling through the depths of hell. He said, “I’m just a drifter….been a drifter all my life. I’ve had no time for family or time to take a wife. I’ve done things I ain’t proud of but I never broke the law And, Jenny Lee, I had to see you once ‘cause I’m your pa.” “There was no way that I could know the day I rode away. Your mama never told me she was in a family way. She sent a letter ‘fore she died that I got just last year. I’ve spent this whole time tracking you. That’s why I showed up here.” “You needn’t say a thing, sweet girl.I’m glad your life is good. I’d gladly change the past and make things different, if I could But fate gave us this hand to play and play the hand we do. I’m glad I finally had the chance to tell you I love you.” “Tomorrow I’ll be riding out to find a little spread Where I can build a house and have a place to rest my head. It’s going to be quite difficult….I just know how to lose But it is time I plop down and take off these traveling shoes.” Jenny hadn’t moved a muscle all the time he spoke. If she had tried to talk, she had no doubt that she would choke. She saw him bend and kiss her cheek before he walked away Then heard his footsteps echo out into the heat of day. The legend has it Jenny Lee just up and disappeared. Murdered by a jealous wife, some of the townfolk feared She ran off with a millionaire, some other folk opined Some others thought the fever got her and she lost her mind. One young boy said he saw her in a buckboard with some guy Her arm around his shoulder, smiling as they passed him by But no one paid him any mind….a childish fantasy Yet there was never found a single trace of Jenny Lee. Mary’s House of Happiness still packs them in at night As cowboys put their money down for fantasy’s delight And, right above the fireplace, placed for everyone to see There hangs a picture ofthe sweetheart known as Jenny Lee. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Wonderful. I enjoyed it to the end.Joyce |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
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ONLY YOU could turn out the story telling theme and carry out the cadence while ya melt us with your heart on sleeve tenderness. The master Balladeer has penned a masterpiece. "Trees are poems that the earth writes upon the sky ... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
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Well, I'm glad you opted to include this one Michael. And you know I loved the story! Very cool. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
...and that is why you are known as the balladeer!!! Your sensitivity and story-telling ability, along with your fine poetic talent, come together in this wonderful saga. Humble hugs, EA |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Balladeer, this is wonderful, sweet friend, an absolute masterpiece, all of the wonderful tales you write are worthy of publication and I am so happy you chose this for the book! (big hugggssssssss) Sonme legends are forgotten as are heroes, but she is bound to ncharm the cowboys and drifters forever with her cheerful uplifting smile, God Bless You, I love this, you have my hearty vote, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Balladeer, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
This one I never read before and it's as good as any of the others. Don't know about your golf but your a damn good poet. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sy said it and I agree.... You're a damn good poet....sir. This one has to be in the book! ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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SEA
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Posts 22676with you |
this is absolutely one of my favorites from you....and the list is quite long... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Having thought I'd read all you'd written, you took me by surprise with this one dear Deer As with any of your poems, this one is certainly worthy of print and has my vote. I'm just gald to see someone is even more long winded than I when it comes to writing You know you'll need three times the votes to get this in the book, does that mean I can vote three times for it? hugs, Ruth |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Bal dear you do it too me every time.... This is also the second incredible read that I've read in just the past 5 minutes!!!! You'll go down in my books as one of my all time favorite poets of all time!!!! VERY NICE!!!! HUGS, Bridgette |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Love your story tellin Deer. Excellent as always Vote's in! Maree |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
No need for me to announce the obvious here, so I'll just mark the box in humble support of your master story telling. -Bob |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You had to do it didn't you? Kleenix alert. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Your poems always bring a smile, if not an outright hearty guffaw, but this one...definitely a smile. *s |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Balladeer - Now what would the book be without yours included, my vote is a click... BC |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Michael, you have my vote... And you'd have my vote no matter how many submissions you made for the book....why did you say this is the last one???? Hugs, Ethel |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
I salute you Dear Sir... how often do you do this... tell wonderful stories in the most pleasant way with the class of the poet that you are... I'd say all the time... Thanks for the treat... regards, sudhir |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ah Balladeer what a treat to read, but then all your poetry are that way...... Charisma |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Yer gonna make me sniffle and whimper, ya scalawag. I love this story. You have a great gift for writing Mike. I wonder if you can write other names as well. lol I really enjoyed this. |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It never fails... when you pluck at heartstrings I seem to have to try to find my way through the mist in my eyes... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I hope it makes it in. This reads like a fine-tuned novella. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
yes yes yes yes yes yes yes... And an extra YES for making Long John snivel... I mean sniffle! *G* |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Mmmm...I think Ron should set aside 6 pages in the book for you Deer, all three deserve to be printed. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
I sit here with my mouth open totally in awe of the marvellous storytelling here. Brilliant! Certainly gets my vote. My one regret is that I only get one vote. I be me BUT who does me be? |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
A tale as only you can tell. |
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cupcake Member
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WOW!!!!! That's all. WOW!!!!!! I'm a reader - not a writer. |
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Nan
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Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You're the MAN, m'Deer... This is awesome.. |
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Poet deVine
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No one does it better. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
OH YESSSSSS!! Give me that western ballad every time. You have an apt pip name sir! Ken J Through rubble and trouble and dark of night The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light [This message has been edited by kayjay (02-25-2003 11:46 AM).] |
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jbouder Member Elite
since 1999-09-18
Posts 2534Whole Sort Of Genl Mish Mash |
Michael: This is an outstanding poem. Considering the cast of characters, I still can't believe you pulled this one off as well as you did. Excellent work. Jim |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Mike .. you truly are our "Balladeer"... thanx. |
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Balladeer
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Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Thank you, fellow poets. I love telling stories and am very happy that you enjoy reading them. Each comment of yours makes me beam....thank you! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
What is this?...payback? You're trying to sneak one past ME now? LOL Love this, m'Deer. "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Your poetry has the ability of pulling the reader into the position of a character and becoming part of him/her. You are an amazing story teller and poet It's a privilege to read your poems Liz |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Yes sir Michael, This was already in my collection. I absolutely love it. Here's my vote. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
Even if that's one last one for the book, I'd like to hear the rest of it...the rest of it in your mind.... Voting :-) HUGGLES KS |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
’Deer dearest heart, I’ve always said that when you write the world stands to listen. When you write as well as this and the story is told with such amazing clarity those who hear sigh with delight and envy. Delight because yet again you are the master story-teller, and envy because they know they will never even in their best days be as good as you. I’ve mentioned once or twice before you are truly an outstanding writer and always your work shrieks quality, if this gem weren’t included in the book then it would be a crime against poetry. You have my vote ‘Deer and I know that when the Mushettes get a chance they will come and vote too. Mummy will make sure of it Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
This is FOR the book? This one IS a book Mike, and a fine one at that. Got my vote. fh |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Okay! So I can't vote again, just giving it a gentle bump to the top of the page. Love it!!!!!! |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I've read it several times now and it just gets better each time. It gets my vote. |
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Flower Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 240California |
This is unbelievable. Lovely! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Even though I've read this before somewhere I love it to pieces - so of course it has my vote. BTW next time you write about my life change the name willya! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
This is just awesome. Jason |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Wow, this was a very enjoyable read. Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent. |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Well the Balladeer rides on into the sunset leaving us with eyes wide and in awe. Well done cowboy! SG |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Yee hah....let's get this here poem in gear..... I enjoyed this too much for it to get lost!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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BSC
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Posts 2919New York, USA |
I will never tire of your reading you 'deer ~ It is simply pure enjoyment ~ Bonnie |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I loved this! Absolutely loved it! It's right up there with the face on the barroom floor! Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Deer this very very good indeed excellent writing, outstanding another one for the book I see I will really really vote for this one. Very well written love and warm stuff as always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
All hail the master storyteller..this is a MUST for the book and to think that Im lucky enough to be your manager You are a true poet m'friend, this is excellent Melissa~ |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Bump.....I really like this!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Just love a happy ending! And all the rest of your poetry. How blessed we are you share it here. Enjoyed, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Muys Member
since 2002-04-06
Posts 389The Netherlands |
You are an astounding storyteller. Muys |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Simple yet a warm touch to the words you give, dear...gotta to be in the book...thanks for sharing... |
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Balladeer
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Thank you all, my friends |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Can't let this slip away... If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Balladeer - only you can tell a tale like this, wonderful. My vote is cast... BC |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
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Bump! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Upsy-daisy!! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Michael - I must say - this is the BEST tale I have read in a very long time and with style and grace - very well done - you had me at every line . . . xxoo |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Of course a third for the book... |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Always look forward to your grand tales 'deer. J There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Street Heart Member
since 2002-09-05
Posts 349Pennsylvania,USA |
Michael,you never cease to amaze me.This is terrific and definitely needs to be in the book.I have to say,though "The Statue In Central Park" is my fav of yours,this one runs a very close second.Vote! Peace,Geoffrey If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living. |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
I am in awe of how you hold a rhyme rythme and story so very well as this. Your story was fantastic.... I was 17 before I was reunited with my "father". I last remembered him when I was about 2 or three. Reunions are such happy occasions. You certainly have my vote...and I am adding this to my library too! Sherry Cherish the good memories of the past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Bump..... "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
I'm glad I had the chance to vote for this. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
And a 'yes' to go with it~ Lovely, my friend~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
I know I can't vote again but I can bump back up. Would love to see this make the book, worthy of all the space it would take. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Michael... This has to be the cream of the crop. Wonderful story...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Balladeer
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Once again, I thank you all, bumpers and voters alike...I appreciate (and am unworthy of) you all |
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Denise
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Definitely should be included in the book! Fantastic piece, Michael! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I love this one.... Bump.... Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
How DO you do this? Man, with all that talent there has to be a book somewhere of your collective works. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Hmmm...does Jeffrey not know about your book??? I know about it but, still need to buy it!!! This 3rd submission has just gotta make it into Reflections!!!! Bump..... "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Balladeer
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Yes, Bridgette, he does now...I saw his post in Announcements. Thanks, bumper pal! |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
What a story!!! Click!!! Neeraja |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
There is not much I can say that hasn't been already said but I will tell you that I have read this one quite a few times and each time it is just as enjoyable as the last. I also find that each time I read it there is something new that sticks out in my mind. I bow to the master of story telling and proudly cast my vote for this one. Well done sir as all your writings are. |
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Balladeer
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Than k you, Neeraja! Mark, I know your words are sincere and I appreciate them very much. Receiving approval from people like you makes writing worthwhile. |
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Krystopher Morris Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 130Ancient land called Chivalry |
If I didn't vote for this I would certainly cry Your godly writing sets me at bliss, For your talent I would die! Never stop writing such AWSOME writes! Thanks sooooo much for sharing! "Death, so called, is a thing which makes men weep, and yet a third of life is passed in sleep." -Lord Byron |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Wow balladeer.....that was long, yet it was so good... Whatever happened to "Short and sweet" ? (¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨) |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Back to the top with thee.... "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
BUMP |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
wait a minute... haven't I voted for this yet?? Well, third submission and about three pages long, so my vote will only be nominal, most likely... still, I have to let you know that I love this one. I read it at my girlfriend's place, and read it aloud to her... she was really impressed too. Great work, 'Deer. Parasite God becomes as |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very good write held my attention from start to finnish |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This poem should have honorary inclusion 'Deer!!!!! Hey Ron whatdya think??? Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Thank you, Bridgette Parasite, I think one of the greatest compliments a poet can receive is to have someone read his work to a third party...I thank you, sir.. |
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
A marvelous story!!!!! It had me captivated throughout... Cheers! |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
I do love a good story poem. This is a good story poem. Thanks Arthur |
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waldopepper Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 157Tennessee, USA |
What a gifted and polished story-teller you are sir. I thoroughly enjoyed this wonderful tale of reunion and love, laughter and hope. A tale of the tallest measure! |
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Rdz9 Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 142MT, USA |
Amazing... story telling and poetry blended perfectly as one... gets my vote. One in a sea of millions has the power to change the world... |
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Balladeer
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My sincere heartfelt thanks to all of you |
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CAVECANEM Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 43Nevada USA |
I see in the months I been gone you continue to write the best ole Balladeer |
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pjtalty Member
since 2002-07-17
Posts 111W.A., Australia |
Your writing style and the way you told this story in the tone and feel of a ballad held my attention all the way. Certainly richly deserves a place in the anthology. Have you ever read any of the work of Australian "Bush Balladists" such as "Banjo" Patterson (of *Walzing Matilda* fame), Henry Lawson and John O'Brien (*Around The Boree Log*)? I think you would enjoy them. Anyway, thanks for this extremely well-written piece. Patrick Talty |
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CAVECANEM...thanks for the kind words. Ole Balladeer thanks you!!! pjtalty...I have the greatest respect for the AUstralian bush poets from Banjo Paterson to Gordon, Lawson, O'Brien and Olgivie, among others. They had a flair of tale-telling and mixing in the full flavor of their thoughts in every word. I think my favorite of Banjo's would be The Man from Snowy River and the Geebunk Polo Club. To be even mentioned in the same breath with these giants of the written word is a huge compliment...I thank you. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I bet those bush balladists talked faster than you though, but I wonder if they could recite their long stories in rhyme from memory? You amazed me beyong belief and I haven't quit telling people about that you realize? |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Michael, I really love it when you tell stories like this. You have such a way of relating history in a way that it touches the present very poigantly. The foibles of life come through this in such a sad way. Some thing throughout the ages don't change much: The magnetism between men and women, mistakes and secrets, a father's love for his daughter, and regrets. This is a wonderful ballad. Karen |
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Thank you, Karen, for clearing away the cobwebs to find this one You're right....the world changes but basic values don't....thank God! |
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