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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
hide me inside of you. shelter me, be my refuge. clothe me in your love, and I will endure, but for now, this moment, I am weak, lonely… so hide me inside of you I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is a beautiful poem. it gets my vote Cold hands means a warm heart |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Frail and needing. I would love to see this in the book. |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
Thank you both. I must say, though... The "Frail and needing" part threw me off... I thought you were talking about the writing... heh...  Kielo I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Kielo, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, may you always find refuge and hospitality in your loves heart and may you be faithfully in love forever! (sigh) This is a true gem, sweet friend, you have my vote, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kielo, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Simple and wonderful....we often feel this way and need what your poem asks!!! LOVED IT!!!!  Bridgette |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
keilo... don't know what to tell you... guess i'll have to tell you the truth.. I enjoyed it... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
what's this I hear about you giving up?  Don't make Aunt Karen come kick yer behind, girl...  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I wish we could all hide sometimes..if only to rest up from life. I like this.  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
what's Karen talking about.. giving up? Geez... you need me to come help her kick you tail? give up..... GIVE UP???? lord.... have mercy on me... cause I'm gonna blow a gasket.. GIVE UP????? |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Kaile, This is great and captures a kind of vulnerability which I certainly have felt. Many times if not be hugged and held and turn off my mind and not worry, then at least put my foot out and slow down my world a second, or like a merry-go-round, jump off for a second.... what is this about what did Serenity say? I am right behind those two. I love your poetry. Lots of talent. LOTS! You have my vote and no doubt any you post here. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Sometimes that's the best place to hide. Short but a good write, Kielo.  --Liz It's not having what you want, it's wanting what you've got... |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
No, no Auntie... (  ) I meant I would have to give up trying to put my thoughts about your writing into words. I just can't.Thank you all for your gracious replies. I love you all, and I will try to reply, although I have little time. Thanks. Kielo I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
"Hide me inside of you" . . . Vulnerable yes, and even slightly erotic (or perhaps my mind is in the gutter? LOL) *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is very well done... so much said in so few words... much enjoyed Regards, sudhir |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Kielo~ I really like this one. Well written, in just a few perfect words. Nicely done. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Such a gentle little poem...just excellent! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Aw, this is so sweet and gentle. Wonderful job. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Simple and sweet - Nicely said... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done! ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You've laid yourself bare, so to speak! This moment of vulnerability is so raw, so real... Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
A wonderful poem, thanks for sharing |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kielo, this is a very good poem. I love to read your poems... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Beautiful and too the point, my vote for sure Jason |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Honey... beautiful Sometimes you find a friend where once there wasn't one. Sometimes you find a love where once there was a friend. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh, I like this |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Damn..that is exactly what I am saying!! Why don't they ever listen??? I loved it. Susan |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kielo Good one, enjoyed. |
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