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Kielo
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0 posted 2003-02-19 01:50 PM



hide me
inside of you.
shelter me,
be my refuge.
clothe me
in your love,
and I will endure,
but for now,
this moment,
I am weak,
lonely…

so hide me
inside of you

I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing.

© Copyright 2003 Jeremiah Leonard - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-19 01:51 PM


This is a beautiful poem. it gets my vote

Cold hands means a warm heart

bsquirrel
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2 posted 2003-02-19 05:17 PM


Frail and needing. I would love to see this in the book.
Kielo
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3 posted 2003-02-19 05:25 PM


Thank you both.
I must say, though... The "Frail and needing" part threw me off... I thought you were talking about the writing... heh...

Kielo

I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing.

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4 posted 2003-02-19 06:50 PM




(smiles) Oh Kielo, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, may you always find refuge and hospitality in your loves heart and may you be faithfully in love forever! (sigh) This is a true gem, sweet friend, you have my vote, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kielo, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Justbleu
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5 posted 2003-02-19 06:52 PM


Simple and wonderful....we often feel this way and need what your poem asks!!!  LOVED IT!!!!

Bridgette

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6 posted 2003-02-19 07:43 PM


keilo... don't know what to tell you...

guess i'll have to tell you the truth..

I enjoyed it...


serenity blaze
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7 posted 2003-02-19 07:59 PM


what's this I hear about you giving up?


Don't make Aunt Karen come kick yer behind, girl...


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8 posted 2003-02-19 08:47 PM


I wish we could all hide sometimes..if only to rest up from life. I like this.
Cpat Hair
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9 posted 2003-02-19 08:55 PM


what's Karen talking about.. giving up? Geez... you need me to come help her kick you tail? give up..... GIVE UP????
lord.... have mercy on me... cause I'm gonna blow a gasket.. GIVE UP?????



regards2you
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10 posted 2003-02-19 09:31 PM




Kaile,

This is great and captures a kind of vulnerability which I certainly have felt.  Many times if not be hugged and held and turn off my mind and not worry, then at least put my foot out and slow down my world a second, or like a merry-go-round, jump off for a second....

what is this about what did Serenity say? I am right behind those two. I love your poetry. Lots of talent.  
LOTS!

You have my vote and no doubt any you post here. Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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11 posted 2003-02-19 09:52 PM


Sometimes that's the best place to hide. Short but a good write, Kielo.

--Liz

It's not having what you want, it's wanting what you've got...
--Sheryl Crow

Kielo
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12 posted 2003-02-20 12:07 PM


No, no Auntie... ( ) I meant I would have to give up trying to put my thoughts about your writing into words. I just can't.

Thank you all for your gracious replies. I love you all, and I will try to reply, although I have little time. Thanks.

Kielo

I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing.

Chanson
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13 posted 2003-02-20 01:00 PM


"Hide me inside
of you" . . . Vulnerable yes,
and even slightly erotic
(or perhaps my mind is
in the gutter? LOL)

*s

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

Sudhir Iyer
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14 posted 2003-02-20 03:20 PM


This is very well done... so much said in so few words... much enjoyed

Regards,
sudhir

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15 posted 2003-02-24 12:09 PM



Kielo~
I really like this one.
Well written, in just a few perfect words.
Nicely done.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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16 posted 2003-02-24 12:18 PM


Such a gentle little poem...just excellent!

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Angel
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17 posted 2003-03-02 01:44 AM


Aw, this is so sweet and gentle. Wonderful job.
Nan
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18 posted 2003-03-03 01:09 PM


Simple and sweet - Nicely said...
vandana
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19 posted 2003-03-03 02:09 PM


enjoyed
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
20 posted 2003-03-03 02:18 PM


Well done!

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Earth Angel
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21 posted 2003-03-04 09:32 AM


You've laid yourself bare, so to speak!
This moment of vulnerability is so raw, so real...

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel

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22 posted 2003-03-04 09:41 AM


A wonderful poem, thanks for sharing
garysgirl
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23 posted 2003-03-04 04:34 PM


Kielo, this is a very good poem. I love to read your poems...

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

Jason Lyle
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24 posted 2003-03-04 06:04 PM


Beautiful and too the point, my vote for sure
Jason

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25 posted 2003-03-05 04:03 PM


Honey... beautiful

Sometimes you find a friend where once there wasn't one. Sometimes you find a love where once there was a friend.

hoot_owl_rn
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26 posted 2003-03-07 08:56 AM


Oh, I like this
Susan Caldwell
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27 posted 2003-03-07 12:40 PM


Damn..that is exactly what I am saying!!  Why don't they ever listen???

I loved it.  

Susan

Seymour Tabin
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28 posted 2003-03-07 12:59 PM


Kielo
Good one, enjoyed.

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