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Breathless
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Breathless |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
I felt your body pressed against mine I saw the passion deep within your eyes Your breath so warm against my skin You remind me to breathe again! Expressions, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very passionate! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, and may true love always fill your heart with joy and leave you happy forever and ever! (big hugggssssss) Yay, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Fiona, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Fee~ You've said a great deal with just a few well-chosen words. I have to agree with passing shadows - There is much passion in this piece. Very nicely penned.  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah...a nice way to be reminded... enjoyed this.. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
That's a GREAT hug! |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all for your kind words. This peice means alot to me for it holds special memories. Hugs to you all. Fee |
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