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regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

0 posted 2003-01-20 03:04 PM

Enwrap me in your jealous zeal.

Make me,

your proud property.
     Carve your caring caresses,
          within my craving feel.

Tag me,

your full possession,
     by your flushed flesh
          upon my soul.

Chase me,

colliding with my spirit,
     make my whole.

Stamp choice,

upon my essence and seal it
     with your kiss.

Take me,

wildly wanton,
     equal to your desired bliss.

Unleash this other half
you've denied all others.
You knew upon view,
I am that part lost of you.

I am here.

Claim me,

buried treasure,
     waiting for your open.

Chain me,

With golden braided love,
     new to be discovered,
         entwined with knowledge,

I am yours, belonged to you,
always and for eternity,
the moment you laid heart
upon my soul.

Bother me,

so I might wrap you in star light
and cast a ray of warm to nurture

~your emptiness~

That, you might know,
yes, this is me,
and, I am all of you.
You've come home,
I am here,
waiting,
to fill you up with
ecstasy of our
~complete~.

Own me, as I own you.

.
.
.
.
.

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

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1 posted 2003-01-20 03:18 PM

Very beautiful, Pat!

zenny
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since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

2 posted 2003-01-20 03:22 PM

very nice write

i loved reading it

especially loved this part:
---
so I might wrap you in star light
and cast a ray of warm to nurture
---

hugs, kelly

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-01-20 03:43 PM

WOW!! This is superb!
Enjoyed so very much!
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-01-20 04:05 PM

Pat, this is beautiful. I like it when you write love poems..very good

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

winston
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since 2002-12-19

Posts 204
NW of Eden

5 posted 2003-01-20 05:46 PM

Bless you for making the space between me and the screen steamy.

I like the way this has been laid out for us readers. Thanks.

It's amazing I won. I was running against peace, prosperity, & incumbency.
--G. "DUBYA" BUSH. June 14, 2001. Unaware of rolling TV camera.

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2003-01-20 05:54 PM

sounds like youve gotten bit by the love bug,
and you may be on your back (amongst other places )for a while.
very creatively written

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

7 posted 2003-01-20 10:18 PM

Thanks to all of you for reading and taking the time to reply. I appreciate your time. Glad you enjoyed.

Michele, No, am not in love with anyone, real or fictional or past or future. Care about and maybe love as a friend, but not 'involved'; and, not in love, such as in this poem. Just trying to continue to write and vary themes as much as possible. But I am amused by your comments, here and on other poetry.
One gutsy lady, you. You make me smile in spite of some of the outlandish things you say.... Hugs to all, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

8 posted 2003-01-21 09:43 AM

no matter what the inspiration or reason..this is well done and a pleasure to read.

now...we need to find you soneone that makes you feel this way.. ( chuckling)

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

9 posted 2003-01-21 09:59 AM

I tried (had) that once too..lasted only 32 years...
not sure it will ever work again.

M

regards2you
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Posts 3940
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10 posted 2003-01-21 10:21 AM

Ron,

Smiling here; I am not holding my breath.... Thank you for taking the time to read and am glad you enjoyed.
Am still struggling with some part of mind holding back the way I'd like to write, not necessarily love poems, but all poetry....am trying to be patient with myself and just glad I started writing again AND for this opportunity to read other's poetry...glad you found this pleasurable....

~M~

I have had a few very deep emotional involvements, one long-term marriage and one very short one (he was my body guard, so to speak) and one fabulous affair with a man who could not/ would not feel....yet treated me like a queen, I've yet to have this kind of love and it would be a miracle, indeed....and it would be til death do us part...(my first husband almost took that seriously) I attempted to describe that classic: once in a lifetime love...you only see in the 50-60 year marriages....

I am so sorry to know of your loss....32 years is a lifetime....divorce really is like death...I'd bet money I'll never have this as depicted in poem....maybe it is easier for me for I've other losses or 'things' I'll never get to experience (Switzerland, for one) at least a flyover, for I hate the cold but am in love with every pic. I've ever seen of it) Though comparing objects to love of your life isn't quite the same.....I've found acceptance and sometimes ~I AM~ as you depicted.....the answer to peace.
I found a deep faith in God, the hard way....and to just stay in the day....
and smell the flowers and TRUST He knows what is right for me....
I do know how very difficult is it, I live it....

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

11 posted 2003-01-21 08:37 PM

Whoa Pat, this is an unbelievable piece of writing.

I hope one day you will find someone who will love and adore you like this. My only two cents worth of advice ... people do not own each other. They love and cherish but not own.

Hugs ~~ Marti

Most of us go to our grave
with our music still inside of us.

regards2you
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Posts 3940
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12 posted 2003-01-21 08:58 PM

Marti,

Thanks for taking the time to reply.
I understand completely your meaning.
Of course not, each own him/herself and fully fuctional independantly.
They marry because they choose to share life together, two separate individuals, walking side by side, not one leading the other.....

Not sure if I can explain my meaning but it was intended fully sexual in meaning, and the full and complete giving of oneself to another...of equal intensity and completeness...melting into one another ~as one~...as one I own him and he owns me and we are inseparable in that way.....we are one, but each owning  ~it~ the essence of our love....make sense???? We are one, I own him, as I own myself. And, I own all he is, as I own all I am, because we are one...That is what I mean....No one owns another, I tried to explain to my ex-husband 1,000 times, but he never did get it! That is just one of the multiple reasons he is my ex-husband...

I did not mean any negative owning, like one has more power, etc.

I mean: "proud property
        full possession
        collide spirit, make me whole
        other half of self, missing"

Best way to describe my meaning he is the other half of myself, I own him, as I own myself....so not just sexual, but spiritual as well, I guess....

I hope I made this clear.

Thank you so much for reading and replying...I appreciate your comments.
Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

[This message has been edited by regards2you (01-21-2003 09:03 PM).]

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

13 posted 2003-01-21 10:15 PM

Whatever set the dreams to flame...
Hot one! ThisDiamond

Connel

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since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

14 posted 2003-01-21 10:25 PM

VERY GOOD!!! ENJOYED!
thank you so much for sharing my friend. =)

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

Mistletoe Angel

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15 posted 2003-01-21 11:04 PM

(sigh) Oh Patricia, this is lovely, sweet friend, this made me smile to imagine opening a treasure chest with the pearls still inside! (big hugggsssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patricia, thank you for sharing!