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EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

0 posted 2003-01-20 04:37 PM

Trees loom under, staring at me.
Shadowy figures of trunks and leaves.
At peace of mind I soon will be,
Cherishing the feeling of this reverie.

Moonlight pokes through the sleeping green,
The night grows older, it now seems,
As I close my eyes to depart to morning,
I dream as if I was an eagle soaring,

Feeling the wind glide under my wings,
The air's solemn howl continues to sing,
Through the dark misty cotton clouds I soar,
I wish it would last forevermore.

As, I slowly regress from the skies above,
I open my eyes to the night I love.

I have sent you nothing but angels, and I have placed nothing but miracles before you.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2003-01-20 04:44 PM

Feeling the wind glide under my wings,
The air's solemn howl continues to sing,
Through the dark misty cotton clouds I soar,
I wish it would last forevermore.

As, I slowly regress from the skies above,
I open my eyes to the night I love.
====================

rhymes divine...lovely imagery...
A mellow and peaceful flight you take us on..
a surreal, ethereal beauty poet sir

I was reborn on the shores of the Chesapeake Bay
Virginia hasn't yet faded away
I keep thinking tomorrow is coming today
So I am endlessly waiting

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-01-20 04:53 PM

I love this!
Very dream-like quality to this piece.
Extremely well done and much enjoyed.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

winston
Member

since 2002-12-19

Posts 204
NW of Eden

3 posted 2003-01-20 04:58 PM

The third stanza seems a bit contrived in its rhyming of 'soar' and 'forevermore'. But it reads well.

It's amazing I won. I was running against peace, prosperity, & incumbency.
--G. "DUBYA" BUSH. June 14, 2001. Unaware of rolling TV camera.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2003-01-20 08:36 PM

EagleScorpion - this write is so very peaceful and serene. It must come from within. I read it over and over. Just great....

BC

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

5 posted 2003-01-20 10:39 PM

well.. its funny u should say that. i wrote this piece about 6 years ago! ! ! Just came across it earlier today and i had to put it on. glad u enjoyed. cheers

I have sent you nothing but angels, and I have placed nothing but miracles before you.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2003-01-20 10:44 PM

The whole write soars...loved the last line... excellent. ThisDiamond

GOlDsparklESS
Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 428
central nj

7 posted 2003-01-21 12:17 PM

As, I slowly regress from the skies above,
I open my eyes to the night I love.
*******************************************

just remember...
every Darkness upholds revelations
for a star's shining Promise.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2003-01-21 12:21 PM

Very beautiful and peaceful feeling.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

9 posted 2003-01-22 01:49 AM

EagleScorpion~
Ah yes...such a beautiful write.
Thank you for the peaceful feeling tonight.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2003-01-22 02:46 AM

peaceful, easy feelin'....

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