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rm711
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since 2002-11-30
Posts 131
Wiltshire, England

0 posted 2003-01-01 06:10 PM



I don’t care who
It doesn’t matter to me
I just need somebody

I’m so scared
I’m so tired
I’m so alone
And it’s so cold

Please take it all away
I’m frozen on the floor
Scared to move an inch
Scared to open the door

I don’t want to be forgotten
But my voice is silent now
My screams are only living
In my past

I want to turn on the light
But if I reach out
The darkness might swallow me
Please take this all away

Time is standing still
All I feel is the cold
And the tears
I’m shivering

And it’s raining in my head
The storm is so cold and hard
Drumming me to the ground
I’m paralysed by grief

I’m trapped in my own fear
Jailed in my own imagination
Set me free
I only want to be me.

"Some men see things as they are and say why? I dream things that never were and say why not?"
Rosie Mitchell

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SPIRIT
Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745
California Desert
1 posted 2003-01-01 06:44 PM


We are indeed our own worse enemy. This is very sad, easy to understand and because of content I am a little leery in saying I liked, but I do. Happy days in the New Year.

My perspective of me is different,
As I look out from within,
Than that of others on the outside,
Trying to look in.     ©spirit

P.R.C
Junior Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 40
Hull, England
2 posted 2003-01-31 04:55 PM


I really like this 1, I can relate to it in some ways. Have to say its one of my faves of what I have read of urs
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